There is certainly a rise in number of people buying various products online. This offers many positives and negatives for the people involved in purchasing and companies involved in selling.
From the consumer point of view, they have varied choices to buy from different websites by comparing products and price catalog online. This in turn offers them useful products at competitive price. Also they need not to have personally visit the shops to get the necessities which in turns save them valuable time. Moreover, the items are delivered at their door steps. On the other hand, companies benefits by buying directly from the market in turn saving them money. They pay for no brokerage costs to the intermediaries hence maximizing their profit. Also, selling online lets them targets wider base of population who are separated by social and demo graphical divide.
As as far disadvantages are concerned to individuals sometimes the product differs in quality and durability which could be checked easily when buying item physically. Also, there are chances of online fraud while paying upfront. On the other side, seller face unnecessary hassles of people returning the items labeling them as defective or unsatisfactory after using them which incurs packing and transportation charges to the companies. Also, certain notorious elements review and rate their products low which affects the image of the seller.
To conclude, I must say that all in all it is a win-win situation for both individuals and companies and we will see an up-rise in trend in years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...m useful products at competitive price. Also they need not to have personally visit ...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...t competitive price. Also they need not to have personally visit the shops to get the n...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'visited'.
Suggestion: visited
.... Also they need not to have personally visit the shops to get the necessities which ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: As
...by social and demo graphical divide. As as far disadvantages are concerned to indi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263537906137 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.162454873646 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0758122743682 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0505415162455 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0541516245487 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126353790614 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.072202166065 0.0403226058552 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70006194128 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.028880866426 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0830324909747 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108303249097 0.021408717616 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216606498195 0.011925033212 182% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1578.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18823529412 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380392156863 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286274509804 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141176470588 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70006194128 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639215686275 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 71.3485956406 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2142857143 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5112830161 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 46.8417366947 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.72972972973 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370346982785 0.332605444948 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0600642123637 0.102741220458 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0458520391192 0.0668466124924 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515633308677 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194053241617 0.148594505496 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132626613502 0.134430193775 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477494746275 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233037313447 0.324371583561 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10807064885 0.0638462369009 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230649496868 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391044480402 0.058150111329 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.