Many people believe that violence on television will ultimately results in more violence among the youth. Do you agree with this opinion?why?
Television has a great influence among young generation. It is believed that programs which shows violence make youth become more aggressive. I agree with these statement. These essay exemplifies the reasons for my agreement.
First and foremost reason, there are plethora of programs which shows violence. By watching these the children imitate like actors in the program. For example, wrestling program has a great influence in them. The children want to become like wrestlers and thereby they think that they can earn more money and fame. Sometimes these all may make them a social threat in future.
Furthermore, programs include movies are telecast in television. Some are worth to watch but others are useless. Fantasy movies are popular among children. They are fascinated by all the characters in the movies. To cite an example , the movies which tells the story of vampires has great impact on young ones. There is a chance that they lead the lifestyle of that evil creature. Thereby they became more rebel nature.
On the other hand television is a good entertainer. There are manifold of shows which helpful for children including programs related to their studies. So a child can use television for good activities rather than use its con side.
In conclusion, violence in television is a root for violence among children. So government should ensure that the programs that telecast must be censored. Otherwise it greatly influences children and its consequence is vulnerable.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250936329588 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.187265917603 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0749063670412 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0262172284644 0.0501214627716 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0524344569288 0.0437548338989 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119850187266 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0299625468165 0.0403226058552 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68752210967 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0149812734082 0.0326793684256 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0973782771536 0.0861772015684 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0187265917603 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187265917603 0.011925033212 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1498.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21576763485 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365145228216 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302904564315 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236514522822 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136929460581 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68752210967 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.6545039436 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 10.9545454545 20.7743622355 53% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4531116719 49.517814964 39% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0909090909 127.492653851 53% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9545454545 20.7743622355 53% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.814263465372 50% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 41.2450018861 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.50704225352 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231395723713 0.332605444948 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0610278010997 0.102741220458 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0674401414873 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.42196335099 0.534860350844 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0947028973788 0.148594505496 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074734304705 0.134430193775 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603504350791 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.216953900218 0.324371583561 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.05773646304 0.0638462369009 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147519203123 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556790796113 0.058150111329 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.