Mark Zuckerberg rightly said, "The biggest risk in life is not taking risks." The history of human's progress is a strong evidence that bolsters this saying. Success of most of the great businesses is attributed to the risk taking appetite of their founders and employees. Though risks scare most of the people, In reality it is the stability and decision to avoid taking risks, that does more harm.
Many people do argue the need of taking such risks that may prove threatening to one's future, it won't be wrong to say these people are more inclined to stability than ambition. If it is the stability that suits better, risks are undoubtedly gratuitous. Moreover, success can be construed in non financial aspects too. For example, a person who is happy with his stable job and loving family is far more successful than a billionaire who has lost his peace of mind, to the never ending struggle to reach at the pinnacle.
Success is a subjective term and one's interpretation motivates him accordingly. The higher are one's standards of success, more important are risks. Risks should be considered as a means to success, more capable and skillful, one is in taking risks, more likely he is to succeed. For example, consider the biography of great businessmen like Vanderbilt, Steve Jobs, Richard Branson, all of them had to take big risks to achieve seemingly unrealistic goals. Sound judgement and careful planning are essential for the success. Had these businessmen taken risks impulsively, we might not have heard about them. Thus, it is not just the risk appetite that makes one successful, it is his temperament and sensibility that complements the trick. Thus, it would be wrong to see risks and careful planning as two contrasting factors, instead it is their combo that is magical in its effects.
In nutshell, one's interpretation of success, his risk appetite and skills to carefully manage and estimate the risks plays a crucial role in his success. Other than these factors, he should have the ability to stay aplomb during failures. Failures are inevitable outcomes of risks but if one is diligent and tenacious, they are eventually going to lead him to success.
- Argument: The United States of America should dispense with the Electoral College. At present, the President and Vice President are selected in a process that does not give equal weight to all voters. Apart from Maine and Nebraska, states select electoral 50
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- Too much time money and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology Society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens GRE Issue 110 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...uch risks that may prove threatening to ones future, it wont be wrong to say these p...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...le. Success is a subjective term and ones interpretation motivates him accordingl...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tivates him accordingly. The higher are ones standards of success, more important ar...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks achieving'.
Suggestion: risks achieving
...rd Branson, all of them had to take big risks to achieve seemingly unrealistic goals. Sound judg...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...magical in its effects. In nutshell, ones interpretation of success, his risk app...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246376811594 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.171497584541 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06038647343 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0893719806763 0.12292977631 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0410628019324 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75520830935 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386473429952 0.030933414821 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0676328502415 0.0997080785238 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144927536232 0.0249443105267 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169082125604 0.0148568991511 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2192.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00547945205 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347945205479 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271232876712 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213698630137 0.200843997647 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131506849315 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75520830935 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 60.7644974412 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2777777778 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2965719651 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.777777778 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 47.401065449 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.31092436975 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220023877902 0.391690518653 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111544373636 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0929396819709 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491695011865 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160650526234 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947808186307 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529948568614 0.0892212321368 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.425490576253 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0227082411354 0.0692045440612 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164138325342 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403545471309 0.0653680567796 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.