Tpo 27- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Choosing career is a crucial concern for most of the people. One spend most of her time in word place which makes choosing career an important decision for everyone. People hold different views about the job. Some believe that individual should only get a job which matches with her goal. However, other think that working in a secure job has undeniable advantages. I strongly agree with the latter group opinion that if a person has found an opportunity to take a secure job, she must take advantage of this situation rather than waiting for her goal job. In what follows, I will explain my reasons for holding the view that this position facilitates finding the ideal position.
Having a secure job reduces individual’s stress. In fact, financial difficulties is one of the most common concerns that puts soul health in danger. Engaging in a position reduces person's financial concern. At least the person can look at that job as a source for paying bills. As we know, the stress has a lot of side effect which can disturb job searching process. To shed light on my point further, let’s assume a person who is unemployed and has financial problems. The stress interrupts her sleeping hours, since she overthinks about her bills and the result of unpaying them. In addition, the chance of getting depress increases in her. This process is like a domino. Therefore, a secure financial source will prevent this situation and facilities seeking for the ideal job.
Building resume helps individual to find a satisfying job. Indeed, the lake of experience or weak resume is the main reason for failure in finding suitable jobs for most of the people. Sometimes people should go a step backward to have a high jump forward. In other words, sometimes a person should take a job that is not ideal for her to build her resume in order to get her favorite position. Put me as an example, as an immigrant, I have faced with some difficulties in finding a job in the field in which I have studied. I have decided to apply for a job which requires a lower level of education, since it helps me to gain some experience in local industry. This decision has helped me to find my ideal job after a year, because during this time I have gained some experiences which facilitate finding my favorite job.
To put into a nutshell, I believe that people should consider the advantage of working even in a position that they do not like. Job reduces their stress for paying bills. Moreover, they can build their resume by working which leads them to get their ideal jobs. In my opinion, governments should provide some workshops to teach job searcher this points.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...time in word place which makes choosing career an important decision for everyone. Peo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'at least', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240310077519 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.172480620155 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0678294573643 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0348837209302 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0697674418605 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12984496124 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0484496124031 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58189816989 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0232558139535 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110465116279 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213178294574 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213178294574 0.0139019557991 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2655.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 462.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74675324675 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344155844156 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244588744589 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162337662338 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0995670995671 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58189816989 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482683982684 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.6929074411 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7915874453 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8214285714 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.392857142857 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.9588744589 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.51048951049 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32962673917 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0833743157236 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0812179070493 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.397581276767 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0997710720894 0.151897553556 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10660000139 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063901866413 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372403056451 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.031476946481 0.067059652881 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236565390086 0.210909579961 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585845619649 0.0618886996521 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.