This argue is about that people who instantly make a decision only because of their emotion and that time they cannot take an opinion of anyone else and quickly take decision of that. So, That decision may be dangerous and unexpected sometime. After we are checks the decisions with logically they are poor decision of that time. So, Without any opinion of particular topic we should not take any decision with immediately. I am supporting this issue with many empirical and normative standpoints which is discuss below.
First of all, We all people have bad habit of immediate action of any action and we cannot wait until that consequence may become more effective. So, In that of mankind we are taking any contemporary decision of that time without worry about the future. For Instance, Julia Lee Student of CS Department. She had got an opportunity to visit NASA campus, but she suddenly take a decision that she would not go at that time because of some reason and then she has realize that she made a big mistake to left an opportunity to visit NASA campus.
Furthermore, I would say that, Any decision which is taken based on emotion are mostly poor decision. Because that decisions are always one sided. If we are take a decision because of any particular event on contemporary base that may dangerous for us. For Instance, Any country would attack on another country for only revenge is immediate decision. Because that action will take behind country.
In the Last, I concluded that people have always think about their future to take any decision. We should always prohibit the immediate and emotion based decision to become a good decision maker. We have to equally thinking about all merits and demerits of that particular decision and always that decision may not make a big problem on us. So, We all need cautions to made decision based on emotion.
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 50
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- "Sports stars & movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility." -Write a response i 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed on emotion are mostly poor decision. Because that decisions are always one sided. If...
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...for only revenge is immediate decision. Because that action will take behind country. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21875 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.150568181818 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0653409090909 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0710227272727 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0653409090909 0.0444667217837 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.144886363636 0.12292977631 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0255681818182 0.0406280797675 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51465363131 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0198863636364 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105113636364 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0340909090909 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113636363636 0.0148568991511 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1871.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 321.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82866043614 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339563862928 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252336448598 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168224299065 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102803738318 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51465363131 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461059190031 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.8480444646 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8333333333 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2300620867 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.944444444 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 43.0669781931 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.35643564356 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221677915613 0.391690518653 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121776333503 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690225996453 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518516740014 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133220774818 0.149214159877 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974121732229 0.161403998019 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711983777786 0.0892212321368 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332348144836 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554765416263 0.0692045440612 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164912517309 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691968972073 0.0653680567796 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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