TPO-27-2: If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
In the past people have tried to find career in their pleasing field, whereas nowadays, finding job has been very difficult and many difference factors affect in choosing job. Due to facts that there is in the modern and steadily development world, I believe that people should go to the work in spite of it be contrary with their wills. I am so eager to support my idea with following reasons.
One of the primary reasons is that time is important and is valuable in the life. May be you ask what is the time relationship with the job? I think, People cannot lose their age and time for finding opportunity according to their desired. May be it will not happen until their life, so it force them to wait for a long time. For instance, a computer company in my city promised to my brother to employed him in IT part, my brother did not listen to our advice and had been waiting for 2 years to get that job but finally he could not enter to that company and now he is very sorry for losing other job’s situations.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. At the once and in the first step the job can be inverse with our interesting but it has been observed that many of people have become happy after several month of starting job. For example, 5 years ago I thought the best work for me is supervising in the building construction but suddenly I entered in the management company via chance. At the first, I had a lot of trouble with this job but after some month I have saw I have a talent in management filed and now I am very grateful.
What is more, I would say that nowadays the essential things in the life is money and life facilities. I think it is not important how you reach to these conveniences, with your liking job or different job. Today’s people prefer to find job with high quality and especially high salary to supply their family requirements.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated, we can reach a conclusion that aside from rule of job in the individual satisfaction, however finding job with other important factors like salary, security, high quality and so on is more important for the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...y difficult and many difference factors affect in choosing job. Due to facts that there i...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...y difference factors affect in choosing job. Due to facts that there is in the mode...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
... important and is valuable in the life. May be you ask what is the time relationship w...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...opportunity according to their desired. May be it will not happen until their life, so...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forces'?
Suggestion: forces
...will not happen until their life, so it force them to wait for a long time. For insta...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or losing other job's situations. There is also a more subtle point we mus...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'several months'.
Suggestion: several months
... many of people have become happy after several month of starting job. For example, 5 years a...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
...th this job but after some month I have saw I have a talent in management filed and...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in spite of', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215102974828 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.173913043478 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0846681922197 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0869565217391 0.0685040099705 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12356979405 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0503432494279 0.0351676179071 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54979363015 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320366132723 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.070938215103 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183066361556 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0091533180778 0.0139019557991 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2162.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 396.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4595959596 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.270202020202 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199494949495 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126262626263 0.174417080927 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0858585858586 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54979363015 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517676767677 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.278102533 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.75 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7338333265 48.84282405 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.125 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 44.6994949495 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.24087591241 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304029253817 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108016537865 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0700620192073 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543120943319 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193699874793 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122031456859 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507417661871 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309783916886 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0678414111089 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201487201797 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242858408996 0.0618886996521 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.