A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Requiring all students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is a controversial decision which I believe has numerous flaws. I think that students should be given the flexibility to pursue subjects which are interesting to them and which allow them to explore their talents. For example, forcing all students to study a set curriculum would put students with disabilities at a disadvantage. Not only that but also students who have talents which are outside the defined curriculum such as pupils with musical or artistic capabilities will also suffer. Enforcing a predefined curriculum to all students in a nation would narrow the skill set of the country's future labor force which will lead to less creativity in the workplace.
Students with disabilities would suffer the most from this proposed plan because they are unable to perform the tasks that normal students can. For instance, a student with dyslexia will have difficulties writing essays during his Literature class and will be disadvantaged compared to his fellow students. Another example would be an autistic student who would have difficulty completing group projects due to his inability to communicate with the other pupils. A disadvantaged student in a wheelchair would find it hard to play football or other sports during his Physical Education class. All these examples demonstrate the flaws in the proposed plan.
Furthermore, students with different talents will also suffer in a similar way. For example, pupils with musical talents will not be able to practice their craft if there is no class in Music. The same example could be applied to students with artistic abilities who without any Art classes will be unable to practice their talents and fulfill their potential.
In general, this proposed plan will narrow the skill set of future students by creating a workforce with inflexible skills that will be incapable of adapting to the changing working environment. If all of the students that enter college have similar abilities and talents due to the curriculum, college admissions will not be able to differentiate candidates for their programs. Not only will students have the same skillset but they will also lack essential skills such as thinking outside the box and practising their creative talents which are fundamental in the current working environment. Some might say that the curriculum would provide students with a general understanding of the skills required before entering college and after that they will be able to explore other subjects or areas of interest upon arriving at university. However, this argument does have some merit but it is flawed because certain skills such as playing on a musical instrument should be practised at a very young age.
In conclusion, I believe that enforcing a national curriculum with predefined subjects to all students in a country is wrong because it does not take into consideration the following factors: students with disabilities will have difficulty adapting to this new curriculum, students with artistic talents will have their abilities dampened and this creation of a narrow skill set will disadvantage all students when they decide to enter college and pursue their interests.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
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Suggestion: all the
...to the changing working environment. If all of the students that enter college have simila...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'in general', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237659963437 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.170018281536 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104204753199 0.0880659088768 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0274223034735 0.0497285424764 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0457038391225 0.0444667217837 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113345521024 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.054844606947 0.0406280797675 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81637736908 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402193784278 0.030933414821 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104204753199 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0511882998172 0.0249443105267 205% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0237659963437 0.0148568991511 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3256.0 2732.02544248 119% => OK
No of words: 518.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28571428571 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399613899614 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337837837838 0.280924506359 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241312741313 0.200843997647 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123552123552 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81637736908 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432432432432 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.6547371429 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.2631578947 23.380412469 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.6855003417 59.4972553346 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.368421053 141.124799967 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2631578947 23.380412469 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 61.0469416785 51.4728631049 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.66917293233 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360785190476 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120293716855 0.123202303941 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577277384657 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566548060772 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15105884566 0.149214159877 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149651469466 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111316108206 0.0892212321368 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366915223902 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0607511990292 0.0692045440612 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2419688586 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115435190863 0.0653680567796 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.