The following was written by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. At present, the nearest jazz club is over 60 miles away from Monroe; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. In addition, there is ample evidence of the popularity of jazz in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly.' Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. We therefore predict that the C Note cannot help but make money."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction
Group of developers in the city asserts by their writing that proposed club C note will make business by making money, as jazz music club Monroe do. A study of spending of money by jazz music fan is given as evidence to support the argument. However the conclusion of building proposed club C Note lack in giving logical evidence to support it.
According to the author, the Monroe club is 60 miles away from the proposed club,where the club have better jazz music loving audience.And there is no evidence of having jazz music lovers in C club locality.It could be possible that the area around Monroe club is densely populated compared to area around proposed club.
Moreover,the figure given by author is accurate to state the reason to build the club.People around the proposed site may not be rich enough to afford the new club ticket prices.The survey results are confined to particular group of people for which the actual spending can change.
In conclusion , the decision of building proposed site is made in vacuum and must and must answer the arise question by giving logical and mathematically accurate figures and numbers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.356097560976 0.25644967241 139% => OK
Verbs: 0.170731707317 0.15541462614 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0536585365854 0.0836205057962 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0390243902439 0.0520304965353 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00975609756098 0.0272364105082 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.125424944231 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0731707317073 0.0416121511921 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56773262345 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390243902439 0.026700313972 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0878048780488 0.113004496875 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0292682926829 0.0255425247493 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00975609756098 0.0127820249294 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1144.0 2731.13054187 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 446.07635468 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9274611399 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.57801047555 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378238341969 0.378187486979 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248704663212 0.287650121315 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186528497409 0.208842608468 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0725388601036 0.135150697306 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56773262345 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 207.018472906 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.469332199767 119% => OK
Word variations: 50.2910511477 52.1807786196 96% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.039408867 30% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 32.1666666667 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9205058955 57.7814097925 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.666666667 141.986410481 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.724660767414 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.58251231527 279% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.0371329879 51.9672348444 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.51111111111 1.8405768891 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565235624813 0.441005458295 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.242675883713 0.135418324435 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651739036395 0.0829849096947 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.825740308945 0.58762219726 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178926064918 0.147661913831 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.320800799858 0.193483328276 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126350719766 0.0970749176394 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337072561909 0.42659136922 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115726855284 0.0774707102158 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367824207905 0.312017818177 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137013741455 0.0698173142475 196% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.