It is imporant to take care of environment along with economic development, both play vital part in everyones' life.
Some might think that government should put more budget on environment improvement than on economic growth.
However, in my opinion, it is better if government increses it's budget for economic development. I think thise for couple of resaon which I will be
expaining in length in below paragraphs.
First, economic development will bring more taxes. Ecomonic growth will power more revenew, which ultimately bring more taxes for the country.
This taxes can be used for the betterment of society, by developing schools, adding park, payground for kids. By improving these basic fasility, society will get benefited in numberous ways. For example, I live in small town where we didn't had good school. However, big manufactoring company started two years back in our town, and they made pretty good sale which brought good revenew for them and taxes for our town.
This tax used for improving quality of our school and now kids have good teachers better playground and many activities which help them develop
skills whcih would be necessary for them to get good job. Hence, I think econoci development help bring taxex and in turn help to develop good society.
Secondly, along with developing good society economic development will also, help in lowering social issues. Ecomonic development brings more job, which in turn make people engaged and keep money floowing in market. This will in turn help in lowering crime as people would have enough money to carry on with their life. For instance, we all have seen, during economic crisis in USA, many people were out of money. To survive, many went on stoling necessay things for living like food and cloths. This increased the crime rate and everyone was scared to go out as they used to fear of getting mugged by people. All in all, with unstable economic no one is happy, rich people will get scared of crime from poor and poor suffer to meet their livings. So, it is imporatnt to have good economic system and put budget making it more strengthen.
To sum up, with all reason that I discussed above. I bebieve, it is important to put more budget in improving ecomonic growth than to put it for improving enviornment. As, with better aware scociety which is outcome of good ecomonic, they will put effort to save environment. Put vise versa is not true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244588744589 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.177489177489 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101731601732 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0281385281385 0.046263068375 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0584415584416 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0497835497835 0.0351676179071 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47292931127 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281385281385 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.004329004329 0.00188951952338 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.0324675324675 0.0887237588012 37% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0281385281385 0.0209618222197 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017316017316 0.0139019557991 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2429.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 411.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9099756691 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328467153285 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226277372263 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177615571776 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0973236009732 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47292931127 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530413625304 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.0850236727 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.125 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8229649641 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.208333333 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.5376344086 220% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.7527372263 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.65573770492 1.45489161554 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115427785492 0.300154397459 38% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140144862802 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916148182764 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.591392004162 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.226163268504 0.151897553556 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476693285813 0.114077575197 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663978855007 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.155872477475 0.336927656856 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.099314147389 0.067059652881 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698397767197 0.210909579961 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864081896548 0.0618886996521 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.