Nowdays, computers play an important role in our lifes. Most of use are so depended on using computers for our jobs and careers. Some peaple believer that the computers have made life easier. Others disagree. In my view computers has made humans' lifes more convenient for two important reasons.
First, without the computers the technology would not be as advanced as it is now. Technology has made humans life easier and safer and they would not be develped if there was no computer. For example, about 4 years age, I studied biomedical engineering. One of the main courses that we had to pass was the basics of computer engineering. In that course, I learned that all the medical equapments that are essential for doctors need powerful computers. Take MRI scanner for example, as you may know, this device scanes pationts body and gives three dimentional view of their inside. This is very helpful in identifing the problems or tumors, which, as you can image, is very important. The importent point is that they depend on a computer to process the signals that they recive from the body of the patient. This clearly illustrates the importance of the computers in the quality of our lifes.
Second, computers help us to cuminiucate with each other better and easier. Before the development of computers, it was very hard and costly for humans to cominiucate with far people. But, now, all one needs to do is to connect to Internet and with just one click call anyone he intends to talk to. For example, 7 years ago when I was accepted to study in my favorate university, I had to abandon my familiy and move to another city. But, because of computers, whenever I missed them, I simply used my computer to talk to them, and see their faces which was really helpful to me. Also, last month, I had an interview with a professor in USA. So we used Skype to talk to each other. But back when my father was a student, he told me that when he wanted to apply for studing abroud, he had to write a mail on paper and wait for the reply which usully took atleast two monthes. As you can see, the develpment of computers make us feel closer to each other and also helps us to contact with another ones where easily.
In sum, the computers have made life easier. Not only they help humans to have better lifes by developing better equapments, but they also, make us to contact with the ones we love more easily. So, I believe computers should be part of our lifes and we must learn how to use them properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201581027668 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.166007905138 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0573122529644 0.0866891130778 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592885375494 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0909090909091 0.0685040099705 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108695652174 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0351676179071 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4505231867 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0474308300395 0.0309702414327 153% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0731225296443 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138339920949 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197628458498 0.0139019557991 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2503.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54988913525 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294900221729 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221729490022 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141906873614 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4505231867 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518847006652 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.9271421711 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3461538462 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8146292496 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2692307692 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3461538462 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.5191028484 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.05 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270508594511 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0851735806442 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735544872072 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453015486132 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153457379123 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971496480803 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776796925564 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301422761402 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037325325625 0.067059652881 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202392615275 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531771797023 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.