Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument
Argument concludes that woven basket which have particular distinct pattern were not uniquely Palean. To bolster the argument author cited that paean village is situated across the Brim river from Palean, because Brim river is very deep and broad and not Palean boats have been found there so woven basket were not uniquely the palean .However i found he argument is full of gaps and loop of holes since its presents fragmentary evidence. Neither of them is convincing or compelling.
Biggest fallacy of the argument is assuming that there is only one path to go to palean village. It can be possible that there will be alternative path also for there to go to palean village. Author has previously assumed that there is only path to go at palean village however, it can be possible that there can be another path which may be going from the another village or mountain may be possible.
Another bigger fallacy in the argument in assuming that river is very deep and broad so it can be only crossed by only by boat .there are more other choice may be possible to across river. Moreover, it is also assumed that there were no boats have been found nonetheless it can possible that when research have done at that time only there were no boats because of some reason.
Another big reason for my disagreement that if the woven basket from any other village has found or not .No data for that is also not provided. Also that how broad and deep River is not provided. It can be possible that river may be not that deep and broad. Moreover, the archaeologist study has been trough for how many time is not provided. So, argument is based on some illogical assumption.
So, the argument is result of the huge speculation in which author has comfortably assumed a considerable amount of data. Had the author has discussed the above factors into view, it would rendered the argument irrefutable. But whatever presents fails to provide a holistic picture to superfluous claims being made.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-10 | Chloe2021 | 40 | view |
| 2020-01-21 | jenniferjack07 | 58 | view |
| 2019-09-03 | sujoy | 50 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | 1172910232 | 16 | view |
| 2019-08-04 | Muthu Kumar N P | 50 | view |
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 50
- Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. 50
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 50
- Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oven basket were not uniquely the palean .However i found he argument is full of g...
^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...en basket were not uniquely the palean .However i found he argument is full of gaps and...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...en basket were not uniquely the palean .However i found he argument is full of gaps and...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t were not uniquely the palean .However i found he argument is full of gaps and l...
^
Line 1, column 485, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Biggest'.
Suggestion: The Biggest
...er of them is convincing or compelling. Biggest fallacy of the argument is assuming tha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing that river is very deep and broad so it can be only crossed by only by boat ....
^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... it can be only crossed by only by boat .there are more other choice may be possi...
^^
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y be possible to across river. Moreover, it is also assumed that there were no bo...
^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... from any other village has found or not .No data for that is also not provided. A...
^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...rom any other village has found or not .No data for that is also not provided. Als...
^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
....No data for that is also not provided. Also that how broad and deep River is not pr...
^^^^
Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...aeologist study has been trough for how many time is not provided. So, argument is based ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'render'
Suggestion: render
...d the above factors into view, it would rendered the argument irrefutable. But whatever ...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20054200542 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.20054200542 0.157235817809 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108401084011 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0840108401084 0.0497285424764 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.029810298103 0.0444667217837 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0650406504065 0.0406280797675 160% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44093068401 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0758807588076 0.0997080785238 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0325203252033 0.0249443105267 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189701897019 0.0148568991511 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1986.0 2732.02544248 73% => OK
No of words: 346.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73988439306 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303468208092 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234104046243 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158959537572 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0722543352601 0.132149295362 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44093068401 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 219.290929204 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433526011561 0.48968727796 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.7539314723 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.625 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8628109657 59.4972553346 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.0354046243 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.19827586207 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28832764563 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.224304714078 0.123202303941 182% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.172808983134 0.077325440228 223% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.593498899517 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193424584334 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112833238066 0.161403998019 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756124227009 0.0892212321368 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275479267996 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107075793229 0.0692045440612 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192326249152 0.275328986314 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726405848581 0.0653680567796 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.