It is a fact that technological advances affect almost all field of business includes dressing materials. I admit that, nowadays people are not spending much time to make or to repair cloth that they owned. Main aim of this essay is to discuss regarding use of skills to make clothes in the current era and the past.
On the one hand, time limits and technological improvements made way to change the creative skills of human mind. It shows a drastic reduction in the production of hand made materials. To substantiate, previous days hand made materials were available in the market. Currently, mat...
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Essay evaluation report
made way to change the creative skills
made a way to change the creative skills
creative skills of people improves.
creative skills of people improve.
in the work field includes cloth industry.
in the work field which includes cloth industry.
in the work field including cloth industry.
Sentence: However, creative skills are dissappearing.
Error: dissappearing Suggestion: disappearing
Sentence: To clarify, limited amount of money is needed to repair a tared cloth.
Error: tared Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 265 350 //you have good language. To get higher marks, put more content. Read a real story by a testbig user why more content:
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You may try this pattern to give more content:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. reason 1 + why reason 1 + example for reason 1 + a small conclusion for reason 1.
paragraph 4: In addition, reason 2 + why reason 2 + example for reason 2+ a small conclusion for reason 2.
paragraph 5: conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 265 350
No. of Characters: 1297 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.727 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.323 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.35 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...nnovations in the field of engineering. Finally new machines develop instead of simple ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the waste of time where insufficient time for daily works. However, creati...
^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to repair a tared cloth. Use of machine leads to spend more than that. In my...
^^
Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In my view, architectures and growing technological advances played a giant ro...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28231292517 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.170068027211 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112244897959 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340136054422 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272108843537 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119047619048 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0442176870748 0.0403226058552 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82107715706 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0816326530612 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0102040816327 0.011925033212 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1607.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0641509434 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369811320755 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245283018868 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188679245283 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109433962264 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82107715706 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.7988700087 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.25 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7273576279 49.517814964 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.35 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.814263465372 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 37.7783018868 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.92647058824 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296055742008 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104416080551 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0898813392675 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498503778077 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0948851450699 0.148594505496 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105326539404 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697844150513 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240862365932 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.042313868067 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18288758212 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563335258429 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.