Nowadays world is facing a new problem, the extinction of its wild nature and it is happening faster than everyone thought. According to WWF (World Wild Federation), the list of endangered species are increasing day by day. Sadly the main culprits behind this catastrophe is none other than humans.
One of the human activity which threatens the wild life population is deforestation, because of the fast industrialization and population growth almost two third of the total forest is vanished from the face of the earth. As a result animals lose their natural habitat and they are become more vulnerable to life threatening situations. Furthermore poaching is the another human sponsored cruelty which affecting the population of animals like tigers and pandas. Humans are hunting these animals for skin and fur. On top of that pollution is the other major man made activity that troubles the life of animal species in both land and sea. Oil spills from underwater oil wells and garbages from ships and boats are affecting the marine life also.
To tackle this situation, the authorities, NGO's and societies should work together as one. Governments should introduce strict rules and regulations to control deforestation and animal hunting. Non Governmental Organization should keep an eye on everything happening in the wild life and among all the common people should realize the importance of wild life. People should be educated about the consequences of fast extinction of rare animals. In addition governments should set up captive facilities and zoo's to protect species at the verge of extinction in-order to keep them alive.
In conclusion, although humans are this prime suspects behind this alarming scenario, we can not blame ourself only.There are other factors which is also affecting the wild and aquatic life population like natural disasters, diseases and climate changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... face of the earth. As a result animals loose their natural habitat and they are beco...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...nerable to life threatening situations. Furthermore poaching is the another human sponsored...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...scenario, we can not blame ourself only.There are other factors which is also affecti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, third, in conclusion, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38759689922 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88136521268 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4767396217 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129328014918 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492413754422 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478359588804 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652834253132 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628710684163 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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