The graph below shows the unemployment rates in two European countries since 2000 and predicted unemployment rates until 2020.
The graph represents the proportion of unemployment rates in Spain and France from 2000 to 2015 and the unemployment prediction from 2015 to 2020.
Overall, the unemployment rates for France were quite stable compared to Spain's unemployment rates, which experienced some periodic fluctuations and it is expected to increase by 2020.
Looking in details for unemployment rates of France, it recorded at close to 6% in 2000. This unemployment rate declined slightly to reach at about 5% in 2005 before it reached at 7% until 2015.
In contrast, Spain had the lowest unemployment rates in 2000 of about 2.8%. However, this experienced a rapid incremental trend to reach at 4% in 2005 and 10% by 2010 before it recorded at its highest point of 13% in 2015.
From 2015 to 2020, the French unemployment rates remained constant at 7% whereas the unemployment rates for Spain are predicted to have some declines from 13% to 11%.
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some countries are not popular with using a bicycle even though it is beneficial for them. Why?What are the possible solutions to encourage people to use more of bicycle as the main transport? 61
- The chart shows student expenditure over a three-year period in the United Kingdom 73
- The graph below shows information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate. 84
- The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. 78
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241573033708 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.112359550562 0.116061578633 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0449438202247 0.0759168565197 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0337078651685 0.0366838410393 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280898876404 0.0131127313244 214% => OK
Prepositions: 0.174157303371 0.155750635184 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0224719101124 0.0379272487307 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92917436063 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0561797752809 0.0210936926555 266% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674157303371 0.0948980150116 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00561797752809 0.00967000014798 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 925.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96774193548 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296774193548 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238709677419 0.247514529752 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.171178102325 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116129032258 0.112407865282 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92917436063 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 42.421344664 49.3433353143 86% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1428571429 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1928511315 42.9750493124 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.142857143 135.714022679 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 46.0138248848 47.7609492067 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.51612903226 2.94281807926 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400270008686 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.193432981844 0.181151798455 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581320925244 0.0850326197045 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.843574549462 0.706616315825 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151810307028 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240968596055 0.228904883108 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116592923036 0.108899403657 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315915947694 0.367819155151 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.136277873807 0.0812612215331 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277003038624 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076362659633 0.0921553760075 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.14146341463 526% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 0.956097560976 628% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.