Nowadays, many people go for shopping in free time. It has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. What are the reasons for this? Is this positive or negative development?
In past, there were very few shopping malls but as time goes the number increased from few to more. The reason is simple, it’s all about people's interest.
So, as shopping mall number grows, people choose their leisure time as, roaming in malls and slowly it becomes habit. It has some benefits, for example during the time of shopping you can meet new people's and also will get updated with the latest arrival of the new product. By this person will get better grip in communication skills by talking to shopkeepers or other person whom they meet during the time of shopping.
As coin has two sides, there are negative impacts of the shopping too. By doing such activities in free time, a person can lack in certain aspects of his life. For example, If a person is spending all his free time, which he is getting after long hours of work, may cause him loose of concentration at work place. Secondly, he might not give enough time to his family, which is more important than roaming in shopping malls. So, instead of wasting all the time in the shopping mall, he can utilize that time in social life or even try to relax themselves, which will help them a lot in all phases of life.
So, at last I want to conclude that, to waste your free time in shopping malls is not a good choice, because of this you might lost in other parts of your life, which plays a vital role to achieve a success. To be a balanced in life is the key mantra of happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
In past, there were very few shopping malls but...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21568627451 0.247107183377 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.156862745098 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816993464052 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457516339869 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.062091503268 0.0437548338989 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.143790849673 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0490196078431 0.0403226058552 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.24554428498 2.80594681477 80% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261437908497 0.0326793684256 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.078431372549 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0294117647059 0.021408717616 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016339869281 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1465.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 270.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 6.12580529183 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27037037037 0.374742101984 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181481481481 0.28420135186 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1 0.203846283523 49% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0481481481481 0.137316102897 35% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.24554428498 2.80594681477 80% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.5644779415 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.055145086 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 40.6481481481 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.54320987654 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304017799145 0.332605444948 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118225320603 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0699529277132 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576350552546 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154732743739 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127489679537 0.134430193775 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349418388931 0.0742795772207 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332552723444 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0744842885319 0.0638462369009 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19490629947 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419842955704 0.058150111329 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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