University has 2 programs for students in break time between 2 semesters. Which one do you prefer?1) Taking some courses or classes which have no connection with your major,2) Take work project (working in city, or in school to teach children to overcome/

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University has 2 programs for students in break time between 2 semesters. Which one do you prefer?
1) Taking some courses or classes which have no connection with your major,
2) Take work project (working in city, or in school to teach children to overcome/do their homework.

Submitted by shshadi on Thu, 09/29/2016 - 07:58

At the turn of the new century, with the development of human's modern society and galloping rate of science and technology, there is no doubt that educational system has a pivotal role in the students' success and blooming and thriving the society. Actually, people's attitudes toward its strategies are widely varied from person to person. Although some people adhere to this belief that students need to take additional courses between two semesters, in my vantage point, taking a working project can be highly beneficial since students can socialize with experienced people, and also they can easily find a decent job in future.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes students to take working project in their break time is interacting with knowledgeable persons in their field. As a matter of fact, in today's world, jobs are being specialized and complicated so much so that everyone in charge of a particular job should enjoy a great amount of experience in that field. That is why many students prefer to take a work project in order to strengthen their knowledge and skills. To illustrate more, take a case of an ingenious student who suffers from lack of practical information in his major for instance. If he takes a work project, not only can he get familiar with skillful people, but also he can benefit from their precious experiences. Hence, they can socialize with different people who have different viewpoints in their field.
The second subtle point is that finding a decent occupation in future can be considered another remarkable advantage of taking a work project in their leisure time. It is absolutely undeniable, in the competitive world of today, one of the rigors of modern life is finding an appropriate job with high salary. Students can improve their resume by having work experience, so they can grasp opportunities which are provided after their graduation. According to recent researches conducted in my country, individuals who have working experiences in their school have enough self-confidence to persuade employers to get job. In my own experience, although I graduated from one of the most prestigious universities in my country, I cannot seize jobs’ opportunities. Had I had worked in my high school, I could have revolutionized my life by being employed in a reputable company and I could have accumulated a horde of money and have experienced independent life.
On the whole, according to the above-mentioned points and details, it is crystal-clear that taking a work project in studying period can leave profound effects on a person’s life because he can get familiar with specialist individuals and also can find a decent job in future. It is high time, we overlooking the fact that we can have promising future just by expanding our knowledge in varied fields. How can a student interact with specialist individuals? How can a graduate person find a promising career? Undoubtedly, answer of these questions is acquiring work’s experiences in high school.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...tional system has a pivotal role in the students success and blooming and thriving the s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... also they can easily find a decent job in future. The first aspect to point out is that...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 272, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ividuals and also can find a decent job in future. It is high time, we overlooking the fa...
^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the whole']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153005464481 0.158904122519 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100182149362 0.0723426182421 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0309653916211 0.0435111971325 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.063752276867 0.0277247811725 230% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138433515483 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0582877959927 0.0370669169778 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02350891457 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218579234973 0.0208969081088 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00182149362477 0.00154638098197 118% => OK
Determiners: 0.0746812386157 0.128158765124 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0346083788707 0.0158828679856 218% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145719489982 0.0114777025283 127% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3028.0 1645.83664459 184% => OK
No of words: 494.0 271.125827815 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12955465587 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.04852973271 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400809716599 0.374372842146 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295546558704 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214574898785 0.187439937562 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155870445344 0.113142543107 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02350891457 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 145.348785872 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52024291498 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 61.9230077094 53.8517498576 115% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0529801325 153% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7131169084 49.3711431718 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.4 132.220823453 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.878197800319 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 54.2546558704 50.5018328374 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.78676470588 1.90840788429 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300743376682 0.549887131256 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0912898432715 0.142949733639 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686756019274 0.0787303798458 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461006785842 0.631733273073 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126377551104 0.139662658121 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112685564115 0.266732575781 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731354247944 0.103435571967 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.4013573009 0.414875509568 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0404603328255 0.0530846634433 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209241811565 0.40443939384 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050225135632 0.0528353158467 95% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.2958057395 136% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...tional system has a pivotal role in the students success and blooming and thriving the s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... also they can easily find a decent job in future. The first aspect to point out is that...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 272, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ividuals and also can find a decent job in future. It is high time, we overlooking the fa...
^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the whole']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153005464481 0.158904122519 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100182149362 0.0723426182421 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0309653916211 0.0435111971325 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.063752276867 0.0277247811725 230% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138433515483 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0582877959927 0.0370669169778 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02350891457 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218579234973 0.0208969081088 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00182149362477 0.00154638098197 118% => OK
Determiners: 0.0746812386157 0.128158765124 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0346083788707 0.0158828679856 218% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145719489982 0.0114777025283 127% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3028.0 1645.83664459 184% => OK
No of words: 494.0 271.125827815 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12955465587 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.04852973271 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400809716599 0.374372842146 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295546558704 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214574898785 0.187439937562 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155870445344 0.113142543107 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02350891457 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 145.348785872 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52024291498 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 61.9230077094 53.8517498576 115% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0529801325 153% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7131169084 49.3711431718 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.4 132.220823453 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.878197800319 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 54.2546558704 50.5018328374 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.78676470588 1.90840788429 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300743376682 0.549887131256 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0912898432715 0.142949733639 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686756019274 0.0787303798458 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461006785842 0.631733273073 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126377551104 0.139662658121 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112685564115 0.266732575781 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731354247944 0.103435571967 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.4013573009 0.414875509568 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0404603328255 0.0530846634433 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209241811565 0.40443939384 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050225135632 0.0528353158467 95% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.2958057395 136% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.