I am agree with the statement that young people are required to have the ability to plan and organize in today's complex world, and there are serval reasons to support it.
When young people have some tasks to do, a good plan will let them finish tasks more efficient. Due to the lack of experiences, when young people do some tasks by their first time, they have no idea which task is more important, hence a good plan is necessary for them to analysis the importance of different tasks and help them finish their tasks more efficient.
A good plan can make young people have less probability to make mistakes in their job. As far as I know, when young people begin their new career in a company, most of them will have a mentor for directing them in their work. The ability to make a plan of work will be benefit to young employees, since mentors can check your plan and make sure that young employees is running on the track, so that young employees will have less chance to make mistakes in their work.
Young people can be more competitive in today's job market if they have the ability to plan and organize. In the modern world, with the fast development in technic, our society is changing at a high speed and becoming more complex than the past. Young people with the ability to make plans is more suitable for today's world, since they are always prepare for the change and they know what to do when they find a change is coming than those who did not make a plan. Obviously, bosses will appreciate a team member who is always keep with the change so that this kind of employee will have high chance to get promotion.
In conclusion, the ability to plan and organize is necessary for today's young people, a person with this ability can finish their tasks more efficient, have less probability to make mistakes, and they are more candidate in job market.
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 70
- TPO-43 - Integrated Writing Task Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago. Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world. From the fossil remains, we know that agnostids were primitiv 83
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
I am agree with the statement that young people ar...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...for todays world, since they are always prepare for the change and they know what to do...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'kept'.
Suggestion: kept
... appreciate a team member who is always keep with the change so that this kind of em...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they are more candidate in job market.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226158038147 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.1689373297 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111716621253 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0435967302452 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0626702997275 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103542234332 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0190735694823 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.24497923804 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0435967302452 0.0309702414327 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0871934604905 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272479564033 0.0209618222197 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0217983651226 0.0139019557991 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1879.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 339.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54277286136 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.259587020649 0.338922669872 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.159292035398 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109144542773 0.174417080927 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0737463126844 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24497923804 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421828908555 0.524397521467 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.1694262998 59.2087087015 71% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 30.8181818182 20.5533526081 150% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5692850332 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.818181818 120.699889404 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 20.5533526081 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.747385358 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.26732673267 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418923053984 0.300154397459 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195672258117 0.103427244359 189% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118525854885 0.0752933317313 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.722325653978 0.497263757937 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188052748604 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216527923974 0.114077575197 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892807569662 0.0781384742642 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331683469484 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110369835604 0.067059652881 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300015415967 0.210909579961 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731801430661 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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