Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
For many young people finding an appropriate job is a great concerning. Some individuals prefer to start their career as soon as the find a job opportunity related to their skill. Many other decide to wait for an opportunity they really want it. Generally, taking decision for choosing a job opportunity is very important while it is a hard one. In my view, people should get opportunity job they if they offered a secure job. Here are my reasons which will be elaborated in the followings.
The first subtle point that we should consider is that generally speaking as the time passes, the competition for job opportunity seems to be more challenging than before. Nowadays, the number of graduated young individuals from high ranked university seeking for the job is increasing. We see that at the present time, the number of candidates who are invited to a single job is more than before we had. Many young people fail to get a job even who has a degree from top ranked university which in return bring them frustration. Therefore, I strongly believe that all young people start their career as soon as they face a job. As we see, now job market try to find a most experienced person, so working at a job even for short time could make our resume more appealing. For example, my friend who is graduated in chemical engineering started his job with the unknown company. He worked for the company and attended many workshops, training course which substantially enhanced his job record in his resume. Then after working for five years at that company, he applied for a job opportunity at a very well known chemical engineering company. Since at the advertisement of the job, it has been clearly mentioned that the company seeks to find a person with working experience, my friend could take the job and know he has great salary and position at that company.
In addition, it is important to understand that satisfaction could not be brought by just finding a job we really want. If we find a job and start our career, we may see great opportunities which can make us satisfied. When we do our tasks well and are appreciated by the boss, we may be happy or even if we could get promotion in our job it could be a sense of satisfaction for us. On the other hand, waiting for a more satisfying job while seeing our friends are working and have a salary we may fell disappointment.
To put in a nutshell, I think we should start to working as soon as face a secure job. Waiting for a more satisfying job and ignoring other opportunities can waste our time in this challenging market.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.184 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.076 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.062 0.046263068375 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.09 0.0685040099705 131% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.056 0.0351676179071 159% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76798466947 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.022 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.096 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.028 0.0209618222197 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2589.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 460.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62826086957 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291304347826 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210869565217 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145652173913 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108695652174 0.112833075102 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76798466947 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452173913043 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.3670292837 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9090909091 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0658259527 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.681818182 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.9960474308 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.1369047619 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392537709389 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122439575967 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0800696120418 0.0752933317313 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481287224696 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122737713129 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143948503563 0.114077575197 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578401627891 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352841797778 0.336927656856 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0498254090375 0.067059652881 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26063052192 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634392137319 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.