A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank her for the present and say why you like it.
- Describe some other presents that you received
- explain some of the things you did on your birthday.
Dear Kinjal,
I have received a parcel from your side on this morning. Initially, I was very upset with you because of your absence in my birthday party, However, your letter and the gift have vanished all my complaints about you. I would like to thank you for the wonderful words and the most beautiful gift among the all those I had received on the occasion of my birthday.
You know, It was the first time that I have arranged such a grand celebration of my birthday because of my permanent immigration to Canada.I wanted to share my happiness and precious moments with all my friends and fam...
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 255 250
No. of Characters: 1124 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.408 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.295 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.588 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Kinjal, I have received a parcel from your side ...
^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e of my permanent immigration to Canada.I wanted to share my happiness and precio...
^
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...moments with all my friends and family. thus, arranged a DJ and games followed by el...
^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es like musical chair, guessing game and singing competition. I missed your prese...
^^^
Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I loved your present on anything else. I can give a guess how much efforts and ...
^
Line 5, column 598, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n anything else. I can give a guess how much efforts and thoughts ou have utilized ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I can give a guess how much efforts and thoughts ou have utilized behind to sele...
^^
Line 5, column 688, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... to select this jacket for me. The color,the quality, and the feel of this jacket ar...
^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ket will always remain close to my heart and also it will reminisce your presence...
^^
Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...so much for the letter and the present. with lots of love. Yours sincerely Bhu...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237588652482 0.220444632235 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.117021276596 0.167888034529 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0602836879433 0.0606518309736 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496453900709 0.0506257000042 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.124113475177 0.118615021944 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.107062808482 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0354609929078 0.041066498444 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38276002677 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0177304964539 0.0385302599488 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0992907801418 0.0714148451538 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0141843971631 0.0191574576366 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00709219858156 0.00930345855455 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1428.0 1141.60824742 125% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.134020619 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6442687747 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300395256917 0.284621296913 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221343873518 0.211203875043 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162055335968 0.133321485273 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0632411067194 0.0843313296314 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38276002677 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.622163163488 95% => OK
Word variations: 61.29638662 62.8969750728 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0714285714 16.4300151701 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1483852256 44.7399317507 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 90.9928171075 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.4300151701 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.613754768223 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.09278350515 478% => OK
Readability: 40.2058159232 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.34146341463 1.13073093955 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395237880174 0.331212695627 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0835031304198 0.0927372745006 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0875744748966 0.0736520305886 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522579769957 0.579516596996 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219121394048 0.180689518051 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141583805932 0.122183219658 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102548558584 0.0765303033291 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241385335467 0.211926503985 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.173960668074 0.0737400523855 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267115077263 0.203819188451 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113605142395 0.067151250289 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.