“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I do not agree that a standardized national curriculum would be the best way to educate students before entering college. Three reasons why it would not work are differing economic contexts, differing ability of students, and restriction of exposure to a variety of careers.
A nation is a huge area and amount of people to try to standardize. America has fifty unique states, each with unique settings throughout. Cultural differences abound throughout a nation, as well as differences in career opportunities. For instance, living in a more populous area allows for easier access to internships in business and in human services, while living in a more rural area affords more opportunities to learn agriculture and farming skills. A standard national curriculum could attempt to focus on all different types of careers, but generalizing the curriculum could easily cause it to lose substance. A curriculum which exposes students to a variety of career options and skills but focuses on the ones which are most applicable in the area that the school is in would focus the curriculum for a school while also allowing those who wish not to be on that particular career path to find something they prefer.
Just like states, students come in all shapes and sizes. I once attended a speech from a blueberry salesman trying to help reform a school as a successful business. A teacher raised their hand and asked, "do you use only the best blueberries in your product?" The salesman replied that of course he did. The teacher went on to say, "here at a school, we must accept all kinds of students. We do not teach only the best, we teach everyone." Schools must adapt to differing ability of students, and a standardized national curriculum would fall short. Adaptation and flexibility of a curriculum is necessary to afford the best opportunity to all students.
College is the ultimate opportunity for a student to learn. It is a commitment to learn all one can about one's chosen career. A student who has had a cookie-cutter education will most likely not know what they want to do when they graduate high school. A curriculum must have variety to show what it is possible to do in college. Having one standardized curriculum will restrict the variety of careers students are exposed to. This connects with the first point about unique settings and career opportunities in a school's local context. Students should be exposed to a wide variety of careers so that they may find the one that they would like to have for the rest of their life. Every person deserves a chance to do what they want to do, and not being exposed to enough careers could mean never finding out what one wants to do.
In conclusion, a standard national curriculum would not afford equal opportunities to all students. It would ignore cultural and locational differences in career opportunities, as well as restricting the variety of careers students are exposed to. It would also be difficult to adapt to the differing skill levels of students. For these reasons, curriculums should be made to fit their context and be able to adapt to afford the best possible education to all students.
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- “A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.”Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the pos 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
... to learn all one can about ones chosen career. A student who has had a cookie-cutter ...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of careers students are exposed to. This connects with the first point about uniq...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a school' or simply 'schools'?
Suggestion: a school; schools
...ue settings and career opportunities in a schools local context. Students should be expos...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...rd national curriculum would not afford equal opportunities to all students. It would...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234797297297 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.179054054054 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0760135135135 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388513513514 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388513513514 0.0444667217837 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0996621621622 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0371621621622 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90435403014 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0608108108108 0.030933414821 197% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00168918918919 0.0016655270985 101% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996621621622 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0337837837838 0.0249443105267 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168918918919 0.0148568991511 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3197.0 2732.02544248 117% => OK
No of words: 536.0 452.878318584 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96455223881 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367537313433 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279850746269 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199626865672 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126865671642 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90435403014 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 219.290929204 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455223880597 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.2607911871 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6153846154 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2625793231 59.4972553346 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.961538462 141.124799967 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.674092028746 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 48.6004592423 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.44736842105 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428902268131 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114055344525 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0820612675433 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487669712651 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15630466203 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154743322524 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787923565377 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355948560992 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.082009345268 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28677910347 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549136903636 0.0653680567796 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.4325221239 182% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 7.22455752212 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.