Due to the fast development of our society, our life is becoming more complex than before. This situation requires our young people have the ability to keep the pace with this modern life. And I personally agree with having the ability to plan and organize is important for them. The benefits of being orgainized are discussed in the following passage.
The first and the foremost reason why I think young people should make a plan is that a plan will make them finish tasks more efficient. Due to the lack of experiences, when young people do some tasks by their first time, they have no idea which task is more important. Hence, they need a lucid plan to help them analysis the importance of different tasks. After deeper understanding of those tasks, they can do the important tasks first in order to not trapped in unimportant things.
Furthermore, a good plan can make young people have less probability to make mistakes in their job. As far as I know, when young people begin their new career in a company, most of them will have a mentor for directing them in their work. The ability to make a plan of work will be benefit to young employees, since mentors can check their plan and make sure that young employees is running on the track, so that young employees will have less chance to make mistakes in their work.
Finally, young people can be more competitive in today's job market if they have the ability to plan and organize. In the modern world, our society is changing at a high speed. Young people with the ability to make plans is more suitable for today's world, since they are always prepared for the change and they know what to do when the circumstance around them is changing. Obviously, bosses will appreciate a team member who is always following with the trend of society, so that this kind of employee will have high chance to get promotion.
In conclusion, the ability to plan and organize is necessary for today's young people. With this ability, they can not only do their job more effective, but also make less fault in their job. As a consequence, they will definitely more competitive than the average in their career.
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 66
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 78
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-47 - Integrated Writing Task Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding circumstance'?
Suggestion: the surrounding circumstance
...he change and they know what to do when the circumstance around them is changing. Obviously, bosses will app...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22009569378 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.153110047847 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1004784689 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055023923445 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0717703349282 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112440191388 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0287081339713 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43933003338 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358851674641 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933014354067 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0311004784689 0.0209618222197 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167464114833 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2161.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 381.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6719160105 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278215223097 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186351706037 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141732283465 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0918635170604 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43933003338 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446194225722 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.6714594252 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1666666667 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6604473282 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.055555556 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.8018372703 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.2905982906 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415537557258 0.300154397459 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128357227686 0.103427244359 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0634852138447 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.577162073464 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974562184229 0.151897553556 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18844980926 0.114077575197 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107083686353 0.0781384742642 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362852549152 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0312087708334 0.067059652881 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297615032156 0.210909579961 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953088768977 0.0618886996521 154% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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