I certainly agree that young people today do not give sufficient time and energy to assist their communities. Somebody can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, modern technology changes young persons' attitudes toward the life. These days, all people experience a huge advancement and improvement in different fields of technology and science including transportation, communication, health caring, and artificial intelligence. All of these theoretical and practical achievements not only change human's physical world but also affect young people's opinion and idea toward the universe, creation, and life. In fact, youngsters now perhaps are more interested to move or being up to date with new inventions and equipments such as smart phones or digital computers. In other words, nowadays, in the view of young people, helping to the communities does not have a same priority that had in the past.
Furthermore, time limitation is another noticeable support. Nowadays, both young and old people have to work hard enough to make more money, and so purchase whatever they like or want. Someone, for instance, has to start his work early in the morning and continue it until late at night. Besides, the school or university assignments possibly keep youngster busy for long hours, and as a consequence there is no any free time for children to allot for their communities.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that youngsters now devote more time for communities. Mainly, university teachers and professors try to aware youth about communities’ importance or valuable for society. In additional, there are lots of youth voluntary groups which attempt to contribute communities. However still I affirm that boys and girls today do not dedicate adequate time or attention to their communities. Although there are some awareness and group activities, based on a research study, which has been carried out by Harvard University in 2015, only 30% of young people participated in those mentioned groups. It also predicts that this participation will be reduced to 20% for next year.
Due to aforementioned ground, I think that all folk should bear in mind that young men and women nowadays do not pay necessary time to their communities. Participation of thinking and time are two prime and conspicuous factors.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1953 1500
No. of Different Words: 241 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.167 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.912 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.778 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.273 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ng hours, and as a consequence there is no any free time for children to allot for...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282710280374 0.229887763892 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.128504672897 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934579439252 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0607476635514 0.046263068375 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0257009345794 0.0685040099705 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10046728972 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.018691588785 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05834751851 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327102803738 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00467289719626 0.00188951952338 247% => OK
Determiners: 0.0630841121495 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00700934579439 0.0209618222197 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00934579439252 0.0139019557991 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2396.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 378.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33862433862 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232804232804 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169312169312 0.112833075102 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05834751851 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.524397521467 120% => OK
Word variations: 79.0677640849 59.2087087015 134% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4748354394 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 0.644075263715 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.4714285714 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.86956521739 1.45489161554 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337723950543 0.300154397459 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0623426184092 0.103427244359 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0470281336011 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472030752793 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126073883249 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115704344148 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831664245381 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.289228441746 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0138799533033 0.067059652881 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225393990151 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032971269095 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.