You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers, request that the institute sends you their brochure.
Dear sir,
I have come across an advertisement stating that your institute is offering an evening course to learn numerous foreign language. I was very keen and searching such an evening course option to learn particularly the french language if your institute provides it. I am writing this letter in order to receive some information about the course for the french language.
I need some basic information related the course like the tenure, the batch size, the fees associated and the possible mode of payments. I understand that the french is the third most spoken language in the world. T...
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In fact, I strongly believe that native speakrs can depart the education of their language more conversently than others.
Error: speakrs Suggestion: speakers
Error: conversently Suggestion: ?
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 248 250
No. of Characters: 1233 1500
No. of Different Words: 140 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.968 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.972 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.767 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.443 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.678 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o learn numerous foreign language. I was very keen and searching such an evening ...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...language if your institute provides it. I am writing this letter in order to rece...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the course for the french language. I need some basic information related the...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ated and the possible mode of payments. I understand that the french is the third...
^
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eer. I wanted to be fluent this language and that is why looking forward to the i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227611940299 0.220444632235 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.149253731343 0.167888034529 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0932835820896 0.0606518309736 154% => OK
Adverbs: 0.044776119403 0.0506257000042 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.089552238806 0.118615021944 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123134328358 0.107062808482 115% => OK
Participles: 0.044776119403 0.041066498444 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81436303771 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261194029851 0.0385302599488 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115671641791 0.0714148451538 162% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298507462687 0.0191574576366 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111940298507 0.00930345855455 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1522.0 1141.60824742 133% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.134020619 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13709677419 5.53046319177 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395161290323 0.284621296913 139% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306451612903 0.211203875043 145% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221774193548 0.133321485273 166% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133064516129 0.0843313296314 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81436303771 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.622163163488 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.2278881087 62.8969750728 91% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6666666667 16.4300151701 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2030091545 44.7399317507 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 90.9928171075 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.4300151701 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 51.311827957 37.5504026743 137% => OK
Elegance: 1.39473684211 1.13073093955 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545743799708 0.331212695627 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.169915099282 0.0927372745006 183% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0952625691656 0.0736520305886 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.585884956155 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183969265657 0.180689518051 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217919334874 0.122183219658 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102601882007 0.0765303033291 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349543813943 0.211926503985 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0360816574036 0.0737400523855 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.380324729828 0.203819188451 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117159023705 0.067151250289 174% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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