Transportation is really important to everybody nowadays. Car are the only transportation that is available now. Some people beve that it will stay the same in twenty years. Others are thinking something has to be happened in future. I strongly agree that car will be disappeared and smart car will be replaced.
First of all, I strongly believe that with this much improvement in technology, it is impossible that changes in car and its facility do not happen,now a days in Japan there are cars without driver. So it can be available anywhere in the world. But the only thing that people need to do is that they should obey regulations afterwards.
Moreover, people are car pooling around the world. so many people and one car would be enough especially if they are going to the same destination, the cost of fuel is less and time wasted in traffic is diminished. For example, if as a family we are going to picnic in weekend, it saves more time and energy if we go with single car and finally we will enjoy more. Even if we can arrange by another family all the things would be more enjoyable.
Furthermore, Pollution in so many countries is so heavy that we see in those countries the rate of lung cancer and asthma is strikingly increased. People should think about pollution and most importantly their health in future. Even now so many people in Tehran, Iran are trying to use skype instead of going to private teacher because it will decrease the traffic,headache and injury. They can stay at home and use their computer instead of using a car and go to private teacher in heavy traffic.
In summary, in luxurious life that we have nowadays it it is almost impossible not to expect people using less car and have less traffic and headache in their lives.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Car are the only transportation that is available now.
Description: The fragment the only transportation is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Others are thinking something has to be happened in future.
Others are thinking something which has to be happened in future.
Sentence: Some people beve that it will stay the same in twenty years.
Error: beve Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 159 200 //need more vocabulary words
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 315 350
No. of Characters: 1417 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.213 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.498 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.481 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.141 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ly important to everybody nowadays. Car are the only transportation that is availab...
^^^
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Car) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ly important to everybody nowadays. Car are the only transportation that is availab...
^^^
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e thinking something has to be happened in future. I strongly agree that car will be disa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , now
...es in car and its facility do not happen,now a days in Japan there are cars without ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...s in car and its facility do not happen,now a days in Japan there are cars without driver....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... car and its facility do not happen,now a days in Japan there are cars without driver....
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...eople are car pooling around the world. so many people and one car would be enough...
^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gle car and finally we will enjoy more. Even if we can arrange by another family all th...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ution and most importantly their health in future. Even now so many people in Tehran, Ira...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , headache
...her because it will decrease the traffic,headache and injury. They can stay at home and u...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...in luxurious life that we have nowadays it it is almost impossible not to expect peop...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in summary', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212827988338 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.180758017493 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0758017492711 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0874635568513 0.046263068375 189% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.064139941691 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128279883382 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0437317784257 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66919093067 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262390670554 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0524781341108 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0349854227405 0.0209618222197 167% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00291545189504 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1770.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 313.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65495207668 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313099041534 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214057507987 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14696485623 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102236421725 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66919093067 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504792332268 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.1201315386 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4117647059 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3772659582 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.8175155046 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.15789473684 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262537636325 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136655216041 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0896265847714 0.0752933317313 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537563541796 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16935547605 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104996421372 0.114077575197 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448987755827 0.0781384742642 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324302145802 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0514321846108 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17002526823 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325278797331 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.