Both reading passage and the lecturer are talking about dinosaurs which are not like human beings an endotherm. They are reptile and their body temeprature does not remain the same thirty seven degrees all the time regardless of outer temperature.
plao
The reading passage is talking about polar dinosaurs that remain in polar temperature. However the lecturer cast doubt on this by stating that it was warmer before during the north migration of dinosaurs.
Moreover, the author states that lenghth of the dinosauur leg was so short that he could put it under his body. However now due to its large size and more weight it is impossible
On the other hand, the author states that dinosaurs have Harversian canal similar to back bone skeleton The lecturer refutes this by stating that for dinosaurs was at the time that rapidly growing was not worth it, but the dinosaurs grow more slowly and it is because they do not have constant temperature and they grow more rapidly when the enviroment condition changes.
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Essay evaluation report
before during the north migration of dinosaurs.
before the north migration of dinosaurs.
the author states that lenghth of the dinosauue
the author states that the length of the dinosauue
Sentence: They are reptile and their body temeprature does not remain the same thirty seven degrees all the time regardless of outer temperature.
Error: temeprature Suggestion: temperature
Sentence: Moreover, the author states that lenghth of the dinosauur leg was so short that he could put it under his body.
Error: dinosauur Suggestion: dinosaur
Error: lenghth Suggestion: length
Sentence: On the other hand, the author states that dinosaurs have Harversian canal similar to back bone skeleton The lecturer refutes this by stating that for dinosaurs was at the time that rapidly growing was not worth it, but the dinosaurs grow more slowly and it is because they do not have constant temperature and they grow more rapidly when the enviroment condition changes.
Error: enviroment Suggestion: environment
flaws:
No. of Words: 171 250
'On the other hand' means 'However'. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 7 12
No. of Words: 171 250
No. of Characters: 829 1200
No. of Different Words: 103 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.848 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.061 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.424 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.749 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Plao
...time regardless of outer temperature. plao The reading passage is talking about p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...saurs that remain in polar temperature. However the lecturer cast doubt on this by stat...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the dinosauur leg was so short that he could put it under his body. However now...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'talking about', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216666666667 0.261695866417 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158904122519 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116666666667 0.0723426182421 161% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0777777777778 0.0435111971325 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0277247811725 240% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122222222222 0.128828473217 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0370669169778 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41257662548 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0111111111111 0.0208969081088 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.128158765124 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00555555555556 0.0158828679856 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0222222222222 0.0114777025283 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1018.0 1645.83664459 62% => OK
No of words: 171.0 271.125827815 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95321637427 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.04852973271 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.374372842146 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25730994152 0.287516216867 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146198830409 0.187439937562 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.113142543107 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41257662548 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.539623497131 113% => OK
Word variations: 55.694679257 53.8517498576 103% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0529801325 46% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 28.5 21.7502111507 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 122.732772043 49.3711431718 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.666666667 132.220823453 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 21.7502111507 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 54.230994152 50.5018328374 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.17857142857 1.90840788429 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504463750342 0.549887131256 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.154897551053 0.142949733639 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0476520971471 0.0787303798458 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71406164109 0.631733273073 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142560331684 0.139662658121 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267845219528 0.266732575781 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521227731432 0.103435571967 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261030180984 0.414875509568 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0325470007734 0.0530846634433 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332542811694 0.40443939384 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029326476846 0.0528353158467 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.2958057395 49% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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