Both readaing passage and listening passage are discussing about Stellar's sea cow extinction. The lecturer cast doubt on the claims was stated by an author.
First of all, the reading passage one of the causes is overhunting by syberians. The lecturer deputs this by saying Stellar's sea caw was the food for several week fs for Syberians.
Moreover, the reading passage mentioned echosystem changes in the area caused Stellar's sea caw distinction. On the other hand,the lecturer disagree with the author and says that if because of it was because of echosystem change whales has to be distict today.
Furthermore, the author says the reason for decline in poplation of Stellar's sea cow is fur traders which came from Europe. In contrary the lecturer states that the distinction happened long before Eiropean Fur tradors
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Sentence: Both readaing passage and listening passage are discussing about Stellar's sea cow extinction.
Error: readaing Suggestion: reading
Sentence: First of all, the reading passage one of the causes is overhunting by syberians.
Error: syberians Suggestion: serials
Error: overhunting Suggestion: overhanging
Sentence: The lecturer deputs this by saying Stellar's sea caw was the food for several week fs for Syberians.
Error: deputs Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, the reading passage mentioned echosystem changes in the area caused Stellar's sea caw distinction.
Error: echosystem Suggestion: ecosystem
Sentence: On the other hand,the lecturer disagree with the author and says that if because of it was because of echosystem change whales has to be distict today.
Error: distict Suggestion: distinct
Error: echosystem Suggestion: ecosystem
Sentence: Furthermore, the author says the reason for decline in poplation of Stellar's sea cow is fur traders which came from Europe.
Error: poplation Suggestion: population
Sentence: In contrary the lecturer states that the distinction happened long before Eiropean Fur tradors
Error: tradors Suggestion: traders
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Words: 135 250
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 135 250
No. of Characters: 676 1200
No. of Different Words: 87 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.409 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.007 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.583 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.011 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.429 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4