TPO6, Agree/Disagree? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
No doubt we are living in a rapidly changing world. Technological advances yield great differences in many aspects of life compared to the situation that our grandparents were living. However, there are arguments about whether or not nowadays life becomes easier. As far as I am concern, we are living more comfortable in comparison with the older generation who lived 50 years ago for reasons to come.
First, human communication has been become faster and easier. Technology has caused explosion in the ways people exchange information. From an instantaneous chat with our friends through Skype o...
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Essay evaluation report
As far as I am concern,
As far as I am concerned,
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1842 1500
No. of Different Words: 241 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.835 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.737 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.412 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.355 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.281 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ing. However, there are arguments about whether or not nowadays life becomes easier. As far as...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264563106796 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.140776699029 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104368932039 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461165048544 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0752427184466 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140776699029 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0339805825243 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79167883147 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315533980583 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00242718446602 0.00188951952338 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0558252427184 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00970873786408 0.0209618222197 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121359223301 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2256.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 381.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92125984252 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335958005249 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251968503937 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196850393701 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123359580052 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79167883147 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619422572178 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 76.6684145153 59.2087087015 129% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4117647059 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4904722084 48.84282405 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.705882353 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.6086150996 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.67592592593 1.45489161554 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161977427141 0.300154397459 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0814800877729 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785779087145 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448211707558 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188413550659 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546851065189 0.114077575197 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347411912033 0.0781384742642 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249878643462 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0270649850189 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100323252664 0.210909579961 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145674903129 0.0618886996521 24% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.