I disagree, because in my own experience I have had great moments making new friends. Knowing new people is interesting and you can discover a friend in people who in the beginning was a strange and only that. There are three specially reasons to consider make new friends.
Firstly, It is fun to meet people. Maybe you spent beautiful moments with the old friends, but if you take the opportunity to know people could be an experience that help you to create new unforgettable moments. For example; I was enrolled in a robotic class. Even though my classmates were men and they were younger than me, I discovered that was not as bad as I thought at that moment. In fact, they became in my best friends. Some of them helped me to improve my robotics skills to program faster than I could.
Secondly, the relationship is important in all areas. A truly friend always offers support when you need it. In this way, if you make new friends, you could receive support in every moment that you need it. For instance, at work if you do not have enough skill to make something, you will need some help, in that case could be the opportunity to have good relations with coworkers and request assistance. Normally people help, but if you offer your friendship so your new friends will give support with enthusiasm.
Thirdly, when you make new friend, you can find diversity of character, hobbies, preferences, pleasures and etcetera. Suppose thus, you want to go to the cinema. Maybe you have friends who enjoy the horror movies or friends can not go to the movies. In case of have a lot and new friend; you can ask someone who really enjoy this kind of movie to accompany you. For all of the above, make new friends could mean increase the number of friends, at the same time, enjoy different pleasures and maybe you can experiment another activities that you never tried before. Finally, making new friends is the best way of enjoying the life with different life mates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('truly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('friend') instead of another adjective.
...relationship is important in all areas. A truly friend always offers support when you need it....
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...is kind of movie to accompany you. For all of the above, make new friends could mean incr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216284987277 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.160305343511 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0687022900763 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058524173028 0.046263068375 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0992366412214 0.0685040099705 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101781170483 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0152671755725 0.0351676179071 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.49500942759 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030534351145 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0763358778626 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030534351145 0.0209618222197 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152671755725 0.0139019557991 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1972.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 349.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65042979943 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315186246418 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23782234957 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14899713467 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0945558739255 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49500942759 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52435530086 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.9784671048 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.45 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7779663373 48.84282405 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 0.644075263715 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.232234957 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.048 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368500663689 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11479580687 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0945161273221 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467393305661 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143117436648 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134399096793 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638718284321 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34772098271 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0220270941069 0.067059652881 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250066983273 0.210909579961 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285714210828 0.0618886996521 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.