Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The author of the issue claim that all people in power, politics, government, education and so force, should be retired after a period of time. He further reasons that success is one of the utmost important factor for many companies that can be accessible through new employees. Personally, I strongly advocate the rationale behind both the claim and reason.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that any field such as business, politics, education, government and so forth, are the pillars of every given society. As a matter of fact, all nations around the globe bend over backwards to reach pinnacle of their days in such fields. Actually, there are different ways in order to reach success in every field but substitution new employees in various realm could provide fertile ground for that company to experience the best days of its business. As far as I am concerned, old people in power after a certain time lose their motivation and are not able to keep their incentive to go on. In this case, the best and more effective ways to cope with this situation could be new and refresh people who look for a decent job. That being so, we all need a well-paid job to flourish in our everyday life, this concept has played a dominant role in individuals' way of living throughout history. In fact, not until nations replace old employees with refresh ones, can the society's progress.
It is also important to say that old employees after a while are not able to think creatively and handle difficulties with the best ideas. Although those in power have enough experiences, they cannot work efficiently and come up with new ideas. For example, sometimes myriads of country confront trials and tribulations in different field like economic recession. In order to recover a country from economic recession those who are in power should make a sound decision to overcome obstacles. Arguably, in such critical situation refresh employees could come up with effective solutions and handle problems in a way that nothing has happened. As a corollary, it goes without saying that new employees always have great motivation in order to prove themselves and make an effort to reach success.
As far as the reason is concerned, it should be pointed out that every human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Indeed, all people in their work face different problems and difficulties and after working in a place for a given amount of time the vitality of all those who have been working there for a long time depletes gradually. To delve further into the issue, all innovations that they had to present to promote the quality of a given company has been already introduced. However, when new employees are hired they can fortify the quality of all projects carried out and even they can present some innovative ideas that would not have been introduced the otherwise.
Having discussed both the claim and the reason, I reiterate that success is one of the utmost important factor for many companies that can be accessible through new employees. Since not only can new employees come up with new ideas but also can work effectively because of their motivations. In addition, new ones can always patronize country to cope with critical situation such as economic recession. Finally, although old employees have the best experience, new employees are more able to come up with innovative ideas and concentrate on problems or even invent new things that have not been discovered yet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...and so force, should be retired after a period of time. He further reasons that success is one...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223765432099 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.149691358025 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106481481481 0.0880659088768 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0617283950617 0.0497285424764 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0324074074074 0.0444667217837 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140432098765 0.12292977631 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0385802469136 0.0406280797675 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64699416829 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0293209876543 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00771604938272 0.0016655270985 463% => OK
Determiners: 0.0895061728395 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0262345679012 0.0249443105267 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123456790123 0.0148568991511 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3523.0 2732.02544248 129% => OK
No of words: 594.0 452.878318584 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93097643098 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.58838876751 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340067340067 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26936026936 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188552188552 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139730639731 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64699416829 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 219.290929204 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452861952862 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.6256423951 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 24.75 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9889788299 59.4972553346 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.791666667 141.124799967 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.674092028746 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.686026936 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.65189873418 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313071928408 0.391690518653 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111870538052 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641467319165 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499951753272 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0923300085325 0.149214159877 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122350416168 0.161403998019 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513713918004 0.0892212321368 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367730150252 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0647613689253 0.0692045440612 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222729401088 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048348014787 0.0653680567796 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.