Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that human beings are interested in getting informed of many things that happen in the world and they always put their efforts so as to become aware of events in their day to day lives. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people should take events happening in the real world into consideration despite no effects on their lives. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that getting to know more about different events and matters will help people enhance their information and knowledge in the various realm. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, there is no doubt that there are many events around the globe happen day in day out in different realm like politic, economic, sport and so forth. These events not only can patronize people to gain more knowledge and information but also help individuals stay up to date about the variety of events happen every corner of the world. Generally phrased, if people dismiss such important events, indeed, they lose majorities of informative events that could be useful in the future. As a tangible example, when people are familiar with different aspects of politic around the world and have enough information about politic matters, this knowledge provide an opportunity for them to analyze political situations precisely and think wisely about them and not to do something erroneously. To elucidate more on this issue, knowing about various matters is really informative and helpful owing to the fact that it allows human beings to face some difficulties and trials and tribulations, which may occur in near future.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that technology has penetrated every single facet of our lives without which our lives seem to be paralyzed. If we take a minute to ponder over it, if people do not have enough knowledge and information about technological advancement, hardly ever can they make a progress day in day out. Although knowing about technology might not be effective and applicable for some people, at least they will be provided with latest technologies around the world. Going into the depth, know about technology and other matters not only can help people to change their view of life but also can help them to adapt themselves to today lives.
However, this is one side of a coin. Know about different matters and events might be waste of time. In fact, it is better for people to spend their time learn something helpful or attend university to gain more knowledge. In this situation, they will certainly become successful in their personal lives and will reach the pinnacle of their lives. For instance, know about astronomy although is important in near future, it cannot teach anything useful to people that do not have any knowledge of it.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...world and they always put their efforts so as to become aware of events in their day to ...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... people, at least they will be provided with latest technologies around the world. Going in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, as to, at least, for instance, in fact, no doubt, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2538.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9862475442 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61316453451 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485265225933 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7900262386 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.45 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188618114118 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625773174283 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365351610049 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110210688942 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337781496253 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.