In today's modern world we are getting information from many sources like TV, news paper, internet and other social media like what's up,you tube and face book and so on. Because have lots of these facility we can access and we are be well- informed without any doubt. So, I want to say that a person must be get information from many sources. Here, I want to explain why it is so important.
First, We can come to the correct conclusion regarding the issues which more important for the nation. For example, last year general election time, the result came from Sun news was supporting the DMK party which is belongs to that party. And, the Jaya TV was saying that supporting ADMK which is run by the Jayalitha so people we are having more confusion regarding the truth about the nominees and they are misleading us. As politician they are not supposed to do that way. They only way we are getting correct information about the election campaign through the The HINDU news who is very neutral neither it support DMK nor ADMK, it always give the true statement no matter who ruling the country.
Secondly, when a student some project work for example, he is doing research in physics. If, he focuses only one author or one book then he might not get the answer what he wants. In order to improve his knowledge he must read all different kinds of author books and their statements so that he can success in his experiment or else he will definitely loses his credits and fame. He must see all social media and internet searching tool to help to required data.
Thirdly, when we want get reputation, we should be well informed variety sources. For example, friend of mine, he much interested in reading all news paper and articles from the website. Further, he goes to debate programs these all events and habit makes him great person, for instant, if, anyone ask about the what going on currently on particular country or university etc. He can answer the question immediately that gives him lot of reputation for him.
Fourthly, we could avoid the misinterpretation from others. For example, in my physiotherapy field ice therapy is good for common sports injuries, one of my friend who done master in physiotherapy from new york university, he says that laser currently more effective than the ice. And he is true now, early we thought it comes the soft tissues because of his evidence based practice. He can able avoid conflict in the treatment part due to vast reference to the variety of books and practices.
So, in order to well be informed, one should read and analysis the different type sources and the articles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... information from many sources like TV, news paper, internet and other social media like w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...r, internet and other social media like whats up,you tube and face book and so on. Be...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...net and other social media like whats up,you tube and face book and so on. Because h...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this facility' or 'these facilities'?
Suggestion: this facility; these facilities
...ce book and so on. Because have lots of these facility we can access and we are be well- info...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these facility we can access and we are be well- informed without any doubt. So,...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...hese facility we can access and we are be well- informed without any doubt. So, I...
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...t, We can come to the correct conclusion regarding the issues which more importan...
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... party. And, the Jaya TV was saying that supporting ADMK which is run by the Jaya...
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Line 4, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he nominees and they are misleading us. As politician they are not supposed to do ...
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...ion about the election campaign through the The HINDU news who is very neutral neither...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: the; The
...ion about the election campaign through the The HINDU news who is very neutral neither...
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... campaign through the The HINDU news who is very neutral neither it support DMK n...
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Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...DU news who is very neutral neither it support DMK nor ADMK, it always give the true s...
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ther it support DMK nor ADMK, it always give the true statement no matter who ruling...
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... physics. If, he focuses only one author or one book then he might not get the an...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...s experiment or else he will definitely loses his credits and fame. He must see all s...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...mine, he much interested in reading all news paper and articles from the website. Further,...
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...m great person, for instant, if, anyone ask about the what going on currently on pa...
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...e could avoid the misinterpretation from others. For example, in my physiotherap...
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...nterpretation from others. For example, in my physiotherapy field ice therapy is...
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...ifferent type sources and the articles.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25390625 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.146484375 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.060546875 0.0866891130778 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.060546875 0.046263068375 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.087890625 0.0685040099705 128% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103515625 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.041015625 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49404502486 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234375 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.072265625 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025390625 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021484375 0.0139019557991 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2664.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 461.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77874186551 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303687635575 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229934924078 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160520607375 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0954446854664 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49404502486 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55748373102 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 67.4000636452 59.2087087015 114% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9545454545 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3742633061 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9545454545 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.54480286738 433% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.9480378624 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.35099337748 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277417205639 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0996011464659 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614944307355 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531083694802 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172367478598 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101437155911 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600810433426 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213601668918 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0774167445605 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177171680669 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049963981622 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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