Schooling contributes to the most of the well being of the students while nurturing in the most appropriate way based on the circumstances to which the students are exposed to in the nation. It is not certainly necessary for the students to follow the same nation curriculum untill they enter college as it may even probe to limit the scope of the students to enhance their skills right from the roots and ceased their ability to meet pinacles.
Study should never be limited and confined to the boundaries as it has major role in shaping the person's life and throwing the best of the student ability to the nation in turn to contribute to the nation as per the field of study choosed by the students. We could observe and count on few nations where as the nation's study curriculum lags in certain aspects and might not reach to the expectations of the student's aspirations, there comes the major importance to align study where it is facilitated at its best.
Considering the fields subsume literature, art, economics, health sciences, sports, physical science could be one of the students' aspirations there by it could be more favourable for the students to learn more and enhance more in their particular field of interest where it would be more likely for the students to develop all around with an open mind as the wish of their preferred subjects dream would be full filled. Students' personal interest would be certainly considered with due responsibility and they are supposed to be given an helping hand in providing the appropirate study curriculum right from the schooling which would not certianly be the very next step in targetting the goal but whereas the key point lies in the appropriate curriculum is that, right from the childhood it certainly enriches the students' attitude towards learning and there by following the best approaches for the students' to excel in their likely professions aligning step by step so as to be more feasible for the students in reaching their goals.
Aside the quality of the education being provided at the schools also plays a most significant role where it could never be comprised in any of the cases. It would be more benificiary for the student to learn in the environment which is of peace without and disturbances such as environmental conditions, terrorists attacks. Study with the most efficient teaching aids and teaching mechanism introducing with the latest technology such as internet connectivity and paper presentation with projects would certainly enhance the students' attitude towards education and would certainly facilitate the study growth in turn leading to enhanced results.
To sum up study in the schooling must be taken care of with more responsibility in facilitating the student with all the possible measure to enrich the student knowledge as the primary education lays the perfect foundation for the student irrespective of the considerations for the nationality.
Schooling contributes to the most of the well being of the students while nurturing in the most appropriate way based on the circumstances to which the students are exposed to in the nation. It is not certainly necessary for the students to follow the same nation curriculum untill they enter college as it may even probe to limit the scope of the students to enhance their skills right from the roots and ceased their ability to meet pinacles.
Study should never be limited and confined to the boundaries as it has major role in shaping the person's life and throwing the best of the student ability to the nation in turn to contribute to the nation as per the field of study choosed by the students. We could observe and count on few nations where as the nation's study curriculum lags in certain aspects and might not reach to the expectations of the student's aspirations, there comes the major importance to align study where it is facilitated at its best.
Considering the fields subsume literature, art, economics, health sciences, sports, physical science could be one of the students' aspirations there by it could be more favourable for the students to learn more and enhance more in their particular field of interest where it would be more likely for the students to develop all around with an open mind as the wish of their preferred subjects dream would be full filled. Students' personal interest would be certainly considered with due responsibility and they are supposed to be given an helping hand in providing the appropirate study curriculum right from the schooling which would not certianly be the very next step in targetting the goal but whereas the key point lies in the appropriate curriculum is that, right from the childhood it certainly enriches the students' attitude towards learning and there by following the best approaches for the students' to excel in their likely professions aligning step by step so as to be more feasible for the students in reaching their goals.
Aside the quality of the education being provided at the schools also plays a most significant role where it could never be comprised in any of the cases. It would be more benificiary for the student to learn in the environment which is of peace without and disturbances such as environmental conditions, terrorists attacks. Study with the most efficient teaching aids and teaching mechanism introducing with the latest technology such as internet connectivity and paper presentation with projects would certainly enhance the students' attitude towards education and would certainly facilitate the study growth in turn leading to enhanced results.
To sum up study in the schooling must be taken care of with more responsibility in facilitating the student with all the possible measure to enrich the student knowledge as the primary education lays the perfect foundation for the student irrespective of the considerations for the nationality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ies as it has major role in shaping the persons life and throwing the best of the stude...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... could observe and count on few nations where as the nations study curriculum lags in ce...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ility and they are supposed to be given an helping hand in providing the appropira...
^^
Line 3, column 816, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...the childhood it certainly enriches the students attitude towards learning and there by ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 970, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ikely professions aligning step by step so as to be more feasible for the students in re...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 527, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...th projects would certainly enhance the students attitude towards education and would ce...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'as to', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242063492063 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.156746031746 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535714285714 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0376984126984 0.0444667217837 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.12292977631 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0595238095238 0.0406280797675 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85020127532 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0436507936508 0.030933414821 141% => OK
Particles: 0.00198412698413 0.0016655270985 119% => OK
Determiners: 0.126984126984 0.0997080785238 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297619047619 0.0249443105267 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138888888889 0.0148568991511 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2947.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 486.0 452.878318584 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06378600823 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296296296296 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218106995885 0.200843997647 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141975308642 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85020127532 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456790123457 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.8735693975 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 48.6 23.380412469 208% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 130.301803518 59.4972553346 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.7 141.124799967 209% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6 23.380412469 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.674092028746 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 78.2296296296 51.4728631049 152% => OK
Elegance: 1.792 1.64882698954 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.796824838872 0.391690518653 203% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.250674487322 0.123202303941 203% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080734877062 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.817155877403 0.547984918172 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113971639319 0.149214159877 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.524204055669 0.161403998019 325% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171902070122 0.0892212321368 193% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.593047003317 0.385218514788 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0382588284026 0.0692045440612 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.638426311093 0.275328986314 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129790673961 0.0653680567796 199% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.