Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Universities can help students to understand students their interests and so they can take courses which fits best with their interest. But interest is very subjective matter, which is hard to understand for univeristies also. Universities provide courses according to degree ciriculum. Some times courses which are in the sllybus, students might not be interested in, but knowledge that subject is important to understand the major in which they are interested in.
If universities take this responsibility, then first they need to understand in which course students are interested. Will it be helpful for them to reach their long term goals? To understand this, universities can put some extra efforts or work shops, but can't require students to take that course.
A student might be interested in some major, just want to know about it more, however doesn't want to take it as course. In this sense, if university, will put him in a group of students who are taking that major and require him to take course, then it may not be good for him/her. It is different thing that he might get interested later or might not also. It will be hard for these kind of unveristies to keep students on track to reach their goal. There is an example of Reed College, USA, in which Steve Jobs, former CEO of Apple Inc. use to study. In this college strudents are allowed to take courses according to their interest, but they course required according to their interest. Which students were finding hard to follow, as they were finding it difficult to follow courses with their changing interest.
Possing university requirements on such a subjective matter interest will make difficult for students. Univeristies can help them understand their iterests, but putting requirements is not agreeable concept, which can cause limitation in students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cording to degree ciriculum. Some times courses which are in the sllybus, students migh...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219584569733 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.189910979228 0.157235817809 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771513353116 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474777448071 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0741839762611 0.0444667217837 167% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0949554896142 0.12292977631 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0296735905045 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77340068388 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0563798219585 0.030933414821 182% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0445103857567 0.0997080785238 45% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0385756676558 0.0249443105267 155% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0237388724036 0.0148568991511 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1847.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 303.0 452.878318584 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09570957096 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326732673267 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283828382838 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201320132013 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148514851485 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77340068388 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 47.9359375535 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9375 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7656808834 59.4972553346 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4375 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.674092028746 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.3203382838 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.10476190476 1.64882698954 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330933846126 0.391690518653 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103977859826 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.079319905849 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516555794066 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13531396505 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136440567009 0.161403998019 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900479175114 0.0892212321368 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341348943725 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.13692890904 0.0692045440612 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233719284873 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998703747029 0.0653680567796 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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