The government is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the government should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people believe that it is important to fund art, while the others feel that it is preferable to protect environment. Although art can reflect our history, I would prefer to choose environmental issue. We need health environment due to survive, so we must to protect it. We need to preserve the environment now to help prevent health problems, to maintain ecosystem and to save the Earth for our children.
Factories and car are making pollution all over the world that cause damage the environment such as air and water. breathing dirty air causes many health problems and it is certain threat particularly for children and elderly. We require to control the amount of pollution we produce due to prevent problems.
Ecosystem play an important role in human life. Plant life, animal life, and people life all depend on each other. Unhealthy environment disturbs the ecosystem and it is affected on people life directly by chain food. In addition, changing the ecosystem has unpleasant consequences such as temperature and rainfall pattern since some species have to migrate to another places and it leads to dramatic ecological change.
If we don’t protect the environment it will continue to get worse and our children will suffer the consequences. The air and water get dirtier and more animal and plant will die. The natural resources will exhaust so it is miserable for future generation. Also, Lack of natural beauty will effect on different group of people such as artist, musician and so forth.
while arts funding is wonderful idea, protecting our environment is more important than that. Without clean air to breath, a health ecosystem, and future for our children the human race will not survive. Health environment bring on health children who can participate in and appreciate the arts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ealth environment due to survive, so we must to protect it. We need to preserve the env...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Breathing
... the environment such as air and water. breathing dirty air causes many health problems a...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: controlling
...ly for children and elderly. We require to control the amount of pollution we produce due ...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...uce due to prevent problems. Ecosystem play an important role in human life. Plant ...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...tion. Also, Lack of natural beauty will effect on different group of people such as ar...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...such as artist, musician and so forth. while arts funding is wonderful idea, protect...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247734138973 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.172205438066 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102719033233 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.02416918429 0.046263068375 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0604229607251 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0906344410876 0.118717715034 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0211480362538 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74335367962 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0483383685801 0.0309702414327 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0694864048338 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302114803625 0.0209618222197 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00604229607251 0.0139019557991 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1810.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 297.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09427609428 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393939393939 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289562289562 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208754208754 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141414141414 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74335367962 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 58.5272301955 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4034909834 48.84282405 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 45.4562289562 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381864381897 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13083749407 0.103427244359 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101680852087 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547169935479 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0889259643039 0.151897553556 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146454476523 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988325887353 0.0781384742642 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273169000653 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0488841414212 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249428472368 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747352829618 0.0618886996521 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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