A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child`s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
There are many ways to contribute a child’s development, from the way of educating to way of entertaining, which can increase their knowledge. If I had chance to give a child a gift it would be a bicycle because it means physical activity, transportation, and independence. It would help them to learn new skill and have more joyful time.
Bikes are wonderful from of physical activity. They encourage outdoor play and exercise which children are interested in. Nowadays, children spend a lot of time in front of Television and video games so cycling is kind of sports that can help them to increase muscle strength and flexibility. Riding a bike makes exercise fun and prevent children to get sick.
Bikes are convenient form of transportation. A child with a bicycle can easily ride to school or to visit friend. Children don’t have to wait for their parents to take them somewhere and they can go anywhere they want. By riding a bike child never stuck in traffic so cyclist breath in less pollution from traffic than car drives. Cycling also can help children get to know their local area and feel part of it so they can become familiar with city in a simple way.
Bike give children independence. A child on a bike can stop at store or choose more interesting road or explore new neighborhoods. In addition, they can go out with peers and participate in typical activity with others so they feel self-confidence and learn how to make friend and get social life. Bike give them a plenty of opportunity to explore the world and make communication.
To conclude, bike is a good gift for children to be living in healthy lifestyle, transporting in simple way and feeling independence. Not only is it valuable for the children body development but also for their personality and way of acting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'in addition', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269565217391 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.165217391304 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0840579710145 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0289855072464 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0579710144928 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110144927536 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0260869565217 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9413155818 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.0309702414327 140% => OK
Particles: 0.00289855072464 0.00188951952338 153% => OK
Determiners: 0.0492753623188 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289855072464 0.0209618222197 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144927536232 0.0139019557991 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1807.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81028938907 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292604501608 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234726688103 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173633440514 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112540192926 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9413155818 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 54.7963840597 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2777777778 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8564560382 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.388888889 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.7504465881 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.6091954023 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279369589503 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0703330441095 0.103427244359 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.058437738356 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497761981322 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151710656741 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105759669483 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725838309276 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293375729493 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0709626418569 0.067059652881 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186522894812 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734199961238 0.0618886996521 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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