You stayed at a hotel last week. After you git home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter
-explain what happened to your watch
-describe your watch
-ask the manager to help you find it
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am Liezl, and I am your guest in your hotel. Last Wednesday, August 24, 2016, I checked in at 12:30pm in room 105, and I stayed there for 3 days. Before I checked out on August 27, 2016, I removed my watch and placed it on the table beside the television. Then I took a bath. After that I hastily packed all my things and left because I have to catch my flight. I left the room at 11:00am.
When I got home, I found out that my watch was missing. It was a digital watch. The brand name is Casio, and it is black in color. Its strap was made of rubber. But I am sorry to tell that I cannot remember its serial number.
I need your help to find my watch. For more information that you want to ask from me, you can contact me in this number +966534259456.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours Truly,
Liezl Comora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...flight. I left the room at 11:00am. When I got home, I found out that my wat...
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...tch. The brand name is Casio, and it is black in color. Its strap was made of rubber. But I am...
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... cannot remember its serial number. I need your help to find my watch. For m...
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...act me in this number +966534259456. Thank you for your cooperation. Your...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20207253886 0.220444632235 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.155440414508 0.167888034529 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0310880829016 0.0606518309736 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0155440414508 0.0506257000042 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.176165803109 0.118615021944 149% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108808290155 0.107062808482 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0103626943005 0.041066498444 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.26816628871 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020725388601 0.0385302599488 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0103626943005 0.00132118243153 784% => OK
Determiners: 0.0466321243523 0.0714148451538 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0103626943005 0.0191574576366 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00518134715026 0.00930345855455 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 868.0 1141.60824742 76% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.134020619 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22891566265 5.53046319177 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.234939759036 0.284621296913 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.114457831325 0.211203875043 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0481927710843 0.133321485273 36% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0301204819277 0.0843313296314 36% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.26816628871 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.5737093183 62.8969750728 95% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0666666667 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3808419165 44.7399317507 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8666666667 90.9928171075 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0666666667 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.613754768223 33% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 22.5124497992 37.5504026743 60% => OK
Elegance: 0.925373134328 1.13073093955 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364650256725 0.331212695627 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0836130339562 0.0927372745006 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.081409074905 0.0736520305886 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461200674705 0.579516596996 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206332797192 0.180689518051 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108984088864 0.122183219658 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911036538672 0.0765303033291 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.166727476317 0.211926503985 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0335854693654 0.0737400523855 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239049436657 0.203819188451 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835032210393 0.067151250289 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.0206185567 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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