The supplied line graphs give information on the unemployment rates in two countries namely the US and Japan from 1993 to 1999.
Overall, over period of six years the rates for the US decreased with few fluctuations and for Japan increased before joining the same point at the end of given period.
As can be observed, in 1993 unemployment rates were around 2.5 and 7 percent for Japan and the US respectively. In other words, jobless people were highest in the US and lowest in Japan.Nevertheless, the scenario was changed in following 5 years and with oscillations the rates rose gradually in Japan and declined tediously in the US. In march1996, japan jobless people reached approximately 4% and the US just above 5%.
Following this, the rates became more or less close to each other and ran parallely in 1997. Afterwards, in mid 1998 both countries figures merges and become plateued till 1999 at 5 percent.
- The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990 52
- In some countries fast food restaurant and companies give money to school provided that the schools promote their school children products to school children What do you think is the positive and negative in the development of children 80
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 84
- In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? 52
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...e highest in the US and lowest in Japan.Nevertheless, the scenario was changed in following ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople reached approximately 4% and the US just above 5%. Following this, the rate...
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Discourse Markers used:
['nevertheless', 'in other words', 'more or less']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255813953488 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.110465116279 0.116061578633 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755813953488 0.0759168565197 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0581395348837 0.0366838410393 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.156976744186 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.046511627907 0.0379272487307 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92827360825 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0116279069767 0.0210936926555 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988372093023 0.0948980150116 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00581395348837 0.00437022459523 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 915.0 1161.00487805 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86538461538 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301282051282 0.337110787985 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224358974359 0.247514529752 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.171178102325 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128205128205 0.112407865282 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92827360825 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 55.0107833301 49.3433353143 111% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2857142857 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9840256203 42.9750493124 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 135.714022679 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 44.7216117216 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.72413793103 2.94281807926 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.521646283082 0.418131533498 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.178870692326 0.181151798455 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108695662889 0.0850326197045 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.793265733012 0.706616315825 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156769133757 0.157042692854 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.290437006621 0.228904883108 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118066872838 0.108899403657 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293756551118 0.367819155151 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00832887014531 0.0812612215331 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353099659768 0.316326947829 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107088970847 0.0921553760075 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.