The bar graph illustrates the contribution of three sectors to the economy of the UK in the twentieth century. The three sectors are agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services.
Looking from the chart, agriculture and manufacturing composed the majoritory of the economy in the 1900, the percentage is 50% and 46%. In the year 1950, the contribution of business and financial services increased significantly, which is approximately 10%. In the mean time, agriculture and manufacturing remained the dominent influence. There is a dramatic dwindle in the percentage of agriculture in 1975, that is merely 10%. the contribution of business and financial services increased to 25%. Both agriculture and manufacturing decreased in the contribution to economy in the UK in 2000, which is 3% and 15% respectively.
An obvious trend is that the business and financial services increased sharply in last century and it dominated the economy in the end of last century. On the contrary, manufacturing dwindled generally in the twentieth century . Agriculture wielded significant influence in the early half of last century and decreased its contribution drastly in the second half of the last century.
Overall, the bar chart demonstrates how the three sectors changed their contribution to UK economy in the twentieth century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28085106383 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.0893617021277 0.116061578633 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0759168565197 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0297872340426 0.0366838410393 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0127659574468 0.0131127313244 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114893617021 0.155750635184 74% => OK
Participles: 0.00851063829787 0.0379272487307 22% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.36744431373 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0170212765957 0.0210936926555 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.144680851064 0.0948980150116 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127659574468 0.00967000014798 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1345.0 1161.00487805 116% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.9 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.49758454106 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3961352657 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.381642512077 0.247514529752 154% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.294685990338 0.171178102325 172% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.212560386473 0.112407865282 189% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.36744431373 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420289855072 0.546246751206 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.4069519401 49.3433353143 72% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.25 23.0094962315 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6457045452 42.9750493124 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 135.714022679 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 23.0094962315 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.689975730869 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 55.4142512077 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 3.06451612903 2.94281807926 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.718955570592 0.418131533498 172% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.177109270605 0.181151798455 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0588925193517 0.0850326197045 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.724410285204 0.706616315825 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139966001126 0.157042692854 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.439916203727 0.228904883108 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113023864948 0.108899403657 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.549518984129 0.367819155151 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110074905666 0.0812612215331 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.583391017688 0.316326947829 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13248665771 0.0921553760075 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.