Success, word seems easy but it is very hard to attain. It is the level where people achieve target and satisfy with what they are doing. People compete among selves to accomplish the success with trying new thing. According to my opinion, successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. I have some reasons which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, discuss about the biggest personalities like business man, celebrities and pillar of the fortune companies. If we look back into their past, it is conspicuous to say that they have taken risks to taste the flavour of success. Mostly business men do new things with risk and assume the positive probability in their minds. Investing huge amount of money in an unknown thing is a risk or competing with the market people trying new things. It is not possible to achieve success in one go but people should try new things every time, button of success can click at any instant. Take example of an industrialist Dhirubhai Ambani, who has started his life as a worker in Petroleum Company. He learnt something about business from there and planned to own business. He started textile work from the basic level and gradually expanded that work throughout the country. Simultaneously, he explored in other fields also and now his empire is one of the richest brands of the India.
Secondly, people should take risks in making decisions also, sometimes your decision can become fruitful and you can achieve success. People continue their work with the fear of risks and satisfy themselves with what they are getting. They avoid of the fear of failure. Life will boredom if you are not taking risks and in the last you will realize that life has been wasted without trying anything. Some people leave their jobs for trying in other field like pursuing higher studies or changing the field according to the interest. Even in the field of education, students generally take risk and decide whether to repeat for particular course or settle with what is getting. It is better to give one more chance and may be that chance can be successful. I have experienced same after my primary education. My father encouraged me to repeat for the joint entrance examination with positive hope. Finally, I took risk and qualified that examination in the second time and I stand in a better place because of that risk.
To sum up, I have some other reasons to substantiate my stance but aforementioned reasons are self explanatory enough to glimpse on the statement that people should try new things with risk rather than comfortable with what they know.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224242424242 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.183838383838 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0808080808081 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0747474747475 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125252525253 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0424242424242 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50263568335 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0323232323232 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0020202020202 0.00188951952338 107% => OK
Determiners: 0.0686868686869 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222222222222 0.0209618222197 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0181818181818 0.0139019557991 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2656.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 457.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81181619256 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35010940919 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223194748359 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148796498906 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0919037199125 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50263568335 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525164113786 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.2553503591 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.28 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2292543901 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.24 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 40.5994748359 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.29333333333 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373788997512 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0874431663788 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686669445067 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.418087856836 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156988802674 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124094426423 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105598068192 0.0781384742642 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360947375952 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108011879509 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29282104965 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087181217542 0.0618886996521 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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