The article states that Ethanol Fuel made from plants like corns, or sugar cane is not a good alternative to gasoline, and brings few reasons for that. However, the speaker doesn't agree with the article, and refuses each reason of the article, and consider them unconvincing.
First, the article says that increased use of ethanol fuel would not help to solve global warming problem because it produces carbon dioxide which trap heat in the atmosphere, and cause global warming, but the speaker says it is true that ethanol fuel release carbon dioxide, but plants that we create ethanol fuel from like corns absorb carbon dioxide, so it removes the problem of global warming.
Second, the passage states that the production of ethanol fuel would significantly reduce the amount of foods available for animals such as cows and chickens. However the lecturer opposes that idea , and says: In order to produce ethanol fuel some other part of the plant are used such as callolos, and plant's cells that are not eaten by animals is used for production.
Third, the article writes that the price of ethanol fuel is much higher than gasoline fuel without government's help in the form of tax subsidies given to producers, and if the government cut down its help, the price of ethanol would increase a lot. However, the speaker says that in future, ethanol will become cheaper, and would not need government help always, because if the amount of production of ethanol fuel increases, the price drops down greatly. Researchers estimate that if the amount of ethanol increases three times greater than now, the price reduces by forty percent.
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Essay evaluation report
and plant's cells that are not eaten by animals is used for production.
and plant's cells that are not eaten by animals are used for production.
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.25 21.0 //use punctuation marks properly
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 274 250
No. of Characters: 1325 1200
No. of Different Words: 139 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.069 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.836 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.267 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.695 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.484 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.767 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.226 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article states that Ethanol Fuel mad...
^^
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... reasons for that. However, the speaker doesnt agree with the article, and refuses eac...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cle, and consider them unconvincing. First, the article says that increased u...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...moves the problem of global warming. Second, the passage states that the prod...
^^^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... for animals such as cows and chickens. However the lecturer opposes that idea , and sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... However the lecturer opposes that idea , and says: In order to produce ethanol f...
^^
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e a lot. However, the speaker says that in future, ethanol will become cheaper, and would...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'help'.
Suggestion: always help
... cheaper, and would not need government help always, because if the amount of production of...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.315789473684 0.261695866417 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.128289473684 0.158904122519 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0657894736842 0.0723426182421 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0394736842105 0.0435111971325 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0197368421053 0.0277247811725 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151315789474 0.128828473217 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0197368421053 0.0370669169778 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36540277078 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0131578947368 0.0208969081088 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00657894736842 0.00154638098197 425% => OK
Determiners: 0.0921052631579 0.128158765124 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164473684211 0.0158828679856 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00657894736842 0.0114777025283 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1646.0 1645.83664459 100% => OK
No of words: 274.0 271.125827815 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00729927007 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372262773723 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277372262774 0.287516216867 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13503649635 0.187439937562 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0729927007299 0.113142543107 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36540277078 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.539623497131 99% => OK
Word variations: 52.8063069417 53.8517498576 98% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 34.25 21.7502111507 157% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1561049479 49.3711431718 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.75 132.220823453 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 21.7502111507 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.878197800319 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.39072847682 236% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 61.9872262774 50.5018328374 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.59649122807 1.90840788429 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.752287630485 0.549887131256 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.206231261008 0.142949733639 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0972691965009 0.0787303798458 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.791428218633 0.631733273073 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107142599163 0.139662658121 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.450374953336 0.266732575781 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108729296167 0.103435571967 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359957421636 0.414875509568 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0692278523881 0.0530846634433 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.543147261391 0.40443939384 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935164172516 0.0528353158467 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.