Success of the new eat house in the area depends on various factors, only few
of which have been taken into the consideration here. For a restaurant to make
profit it takes a lot more than just being the only specialty eat house in
city. Several situation affect the food business.
To begin with, the raise in consumption of seafood in last half decade is a good
sign but yet there is no data on why the demand will keep increasing in the future.
Usually people like to change so does their eating habits. There is a good certainty
that the trend might change.
Further more, absence of competition from similar specialty restaurants in area is
inevitable. If there are no rival businesses now that does not mean there wont
be any in the future. Their presence will definitely cut new captain's gains.
In addition, two income families can mostly be made of husband and wife both
working which raises the point that they may get fed up of eating out, concerned with their
health they might hire someone to cook food at home.
Conclusively, making good business in eating totally depends on choice of consumers in food
and most of the people tend to change their eating habits and their taste too for that
matter. Being the only specialty does not provide enough hand over other facts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...a restaurant to make profit it takes a whole lot more than just being the only specialty...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... on why the demand will keep increasing in future. Usually people like to change so does...
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Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...certainty that the trend might change. Further more, absence of competition fro...
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Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lty restaurants in area is inevitable. If there are no specialty food providers n...
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Line 15, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...efinitely cut new captains gains. In addition two income families can mostly be made ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'in addition', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260330578512 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.165289256198 0.15541462614 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743801652893 0.0836205057962 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0702479338843 0.0520304965353 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0289256198347 0.0272364105082 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144628099174 0.125424944231 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0454545454545 0.0416121511921 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34380075714 2.79052419416 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0206611570248 0.026700313972 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00413223140496 0.001811407834 228% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.113004496875 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206611570248 0.0255425247493 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123966942149 0.0127820249294 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1296.0 2731.13054187 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 446.07635468 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73451327434 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.57801047555 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29203539823 0.378187486979 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203539823009 0.287650121315 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110619469027 0.208842608468 53% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0840707964602 0.135150697306 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34380075714 2.79052419416 84% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 207.018472906 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641592920354 0.469332199767 137% => OK
Word variations: 68.8804842522 52.1807786196 132% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.039408867 60% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8333333333 23.2022227129 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1849498344 57.7814097925 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 141.986410481 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 23.2022227129 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.724660767414 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 5.14285714286 331% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 5.0 3.58251231527 140% => OK
Readability: 39.1873156342 51.9672348444 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.703125 1.8405768891 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269398632422 0.441005458295 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0749038246971 0.135418324435 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0817275363076 0.0829849096947 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.776962256285 0.58762219726 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.286825421707 0.147661913831 194% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103994895413 0.193483328276 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647090522182 0.0970749176394 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0535088496892 0.42659136922 13% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390969307366 0.0774707102158 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934349140018 0.312017818177 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473307090886 0.0698173142475 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.