Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
There are plenty of medium exists today to share the latest information with people. Among them, TV is playing vital role. Every people will spend minimum 2 hours per day in front of it. Through TV, people can get to know what's happening across the world. People can spend their leisure time in TV by watching their favorite songs, movies and live news.
The advantages of watching TV is, we can be updated our self with whats happening in our city or country. For example, weather forecast will give the rainfall condition in the city and live news will give the latest updates and so on. Nowadays, house wife are cooking varieties of dishes by watching cooking programs in TV. likewise, rhymes and cartoon channels are very good to spend time for kids. Few more programs, like birthday wishes programs are useful to share our wishes to our loved one.
Also, The channels like Discovery is very useful for us to get the knowledge on animals, birds and natural sources.
In my opinion, the main disadvantages are very few only. Those are irrelevant programs/events during students exam time and continuous serial without other entertainment. It makes the bad impression on TV to switch of it during their studies time. For example, during exam times, TV channels should not telecast any cinema events,film awards functions and new movies. This will directly affect the student concentration on their studies and make them watch it by discontinuing their exam preparations.
The another main disadvantage is debates on the current situation in the country. Definitely this will not give clear idea on the situation. There are plenty of departments and officers are running by the government can take the necessary action on the current issues in the country. Due to this live debates, some people will not proper information on the issues and get wrong information.
So my conclusion is, TV should be important for everyone life and should use minimal time on it to watch entertainment channels, new channels and discovery channels.
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 41
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this? 70
- You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager•Say what reasons made you choose this airline.•Something that you liked about the flight•Suggest an impr 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0146627566 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62879631857 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.863168136 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4285714286 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38095238095 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136781703836 0.244688304435 56% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383392280011 0.084324248473 45% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221716825302 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067952761986 0.151304729494 45% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130485747378 0.056905535591 23% => paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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