A/D: The most important problems in today’s world will be solved in out lifetime.
“Time is the solution for everything!” This popular sentence has repeatedly been told by so many people; from the parents to the professor in university or the supervisor in workplace. The controversial question is what is the people’s interpretation of these words? A plethora of people is in the conviction that people will find the best way for their situation by passing the time. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that people get used to the circumstance and forget the main problem. I am of the opinion that, both of the mentioned points of view have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, there is no denying to the fact that rapid changes in today’s world represent new challenges for the human; therefore, each individual increasingly encounter problematic situations in daily life. The important issue is how people deal with their difficulty throughout the life? There are some people that think actively, so they are always seeking for diverse solutions to eliminate the obstacles or try to reduce the adverse effects of them. Time plays a prominent role for these people because it assists them to find the most suitable approach for their problem. Besides, the fast pace of progress in various fields is another contributed factor that should not be overlooked. Due to its paramount importance of this issue on solving the human’s problems, waiting for innovations is amongst the best choices that a person can have. For instance, a new technology or medical discovery can be the only answer for the hardships.
Another crucial fact that should be taken into consideration is that all the people face with circumstances that there is not any other option but wait. For instance, when the countries are at war with each other, and this war brings the negative implications in different aspects of life to the citizens. Undoubtedly, people have to wait and endure this hard situation until the authorities find any political solution. Furthermore, in many cases, people are in hard situation as they lose something or someone that was precious to them. The loss of dear one is an example that the only time is the only matter that can help them. In fact, time does not solve their problem. It only heals their broken hearts and teaches them how to live with this situation. Consequently, they gradually get engaged with a variety of activities in their life that makes them less thinking about the thing that they had missed it.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that in the overwhelming majority of cases, time is not the solution. Indeed, people cannot make any other decision but waiting since time not only helps others to find a way for the situation but also let that person get involved with other problems and forget the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00617283951 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79324151738 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524691358025 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8948358448 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.590909091 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135500899548 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404377630261 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405332508662 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079524550934 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545056542042 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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