Education is the most important part of everyone’s life, it is essential to be well educated to live a good life and teachers play a significant role in it. But is it necessary to spend more on the salaries of the university professors or it should rather be spending on other things? Many people think money should be saved for improving campus facilities like library, sports stadium and student center. However, I think that the benefits of spending money on salary far outweigh any negative repercussions.
To begin with, professors build the foundation of a student, it is mandatory to satisfy them so that they can teach students with honesty and passionately. There are so many colleges that do not pay a handsome salary to their teachers which lead to frustration because of which teachers do not pay much attention towards teaching. If a teacher is well paid and contented then he will definitely do wonders. I can say this strongly as I have seen professors who are very happy with their salaries and so they teach diligently, in fact, they are quite popular in universities and many students take admission just because of them. Hence, I believe that having a pleased professor is more important than a well maintained student centre as it cannot make the future of a student bright but a teacher can.
In addition, if a teacher is not well paid then he will look for other resources to earn money which will distract his attention from his job which will affect students. In today’s modern world, it is difficult to survive with less amount of money. Everything has become expensive, in order to cope up with this trend, it is essential to earn descent amount of salary to fulfill one’s needs. For example my father was a teacher in a college and he used to earn less which made it complicated to even have basic facilities at home. Finally, he decided to take private tuitions for college students to earn more money. Eventually, this improved our financial condition but it affected his capacity to teach in his college as he became less enthusiastic to teach there and also because he used to get tired by taking classes at home. Although, there are many more examples, but this one story clearly proves my point.
To recapitulate, though there are many people who would think that spending money on the salaries of teaching staff is not necessary as students today are not completely dependent on them, so, it does not matter how they teach in class. I disagree, I strongly believe that teachers not only teach the given subjects in class but they also help in building the personality of a student by encouraging them and helping them in solving their all kinds problems that they might face during college life. Therefore, teachers should not be neglected at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eachers should not be neglected at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82987551867 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69472925252 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497925311203 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4185681357 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.526315789 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3684210526 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119964184472 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447936467615 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406393652703 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791172910906 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036789044659 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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