In modern world, though education plays a significant role in building a bright future but the sole dependency on it does not ensure the guaranty to be successful in future. In this essay, I will shed some light on the possible causes behind it along with the requirements of certain qualities attributable to attain success.
To embark upon, although there are a slew of reasons for this deplorable condition however, in my opinion, the key factor is the lack of practical knowledge. There are innumerable professionals who are not able to do well in their respective fields in spite of being an excellent student during college simply because they used to memorise the course books but indeed were not intelligent enough to implement it in real world. I can reminisce of one of my peers in Medical College, he was the topper of our class but could not manage patients later in his private practise. Consequently, he failed to continue his practise and had to work under some other Doctor which was pitiful.
Furthermore, lack of confidence is another major cause leading to the failure of an outstanding student. It is no exaggeration to state that it is pivotal to impress the audience by one's skill which can only be done if, a person is confident to present his notions and flaunt his talent in front of his superiors and colleagues. For instance, my cousin brother is associated with a multi national company since seven years. But woefully in spite of being diligent and wise, he has not been promoted yet. The reason for this is his shy and introvert behaviour, he does not feel comfortable to express his incredible thoughts. Therefore, he is not able to achieve the deserving position.
Conspicuously, I would like to mention assertively that by assimilating the aforementioned virtues in one's personality, it will be sure to obtain the aspired goal in life and to be an accomplished person in true sense. Last but not the least, we must never rely absolutely on the school books because I strongly believe that outside world experiences teaches a lot more than that and is in fact, important to fulfil our dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ot ensure the guaranty to be successful in future. In this essay, I will shed some light ...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
... To embark upon, although there are a slew of reasons for this deplorable conditio...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...imilating the aforementioned virtues in ones personality, it will be sure to obtain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86263736264 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85618644178 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612637362637 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.144754973 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101441333795 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291580280797 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297517324444 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626165413089 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031219311191 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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