many parents go to work in other countries and take family with them. The advantages and disadvantages
Departure to other countries for work gains popularity in the modern world. Some people think that it is better for leavers to take their family members with them to feel safer while others claim that economic pressure for them is a disadvantage of this decision. My essay will shed light on both sides of this issue.
On one hand, there are several benefits of living with family members in new countries. First, they can receive emotional and physical support from their family members. Being surrounded by daily life pressure ranging from dealing with the bombardment of working stuff to stabilizing salaries, leavers are more likely to be prone to the feeling of fatigue and mental disorder. Under such circumstances, family is a solid platform for them not only to motivate them but also help them overcome these problems . Equally important, the experience of settling in novel land is far from easy due to concerns about safety. Sometimes, as a consequence of living alone in areas full of discrimination and bias, leavers may feel insecure. With their family members by their side, they are protected from unwanted troubles like attacks of strangers and temptation like gambling, drinking.
Nevertheless, this decision may cause several pains. It is undeniable that more people means more responsibilities which leavers have to shoulder. For instance, not only do they have to work hard to make ends meet but they are also are supposed to educate their children. As a result, they are suffering a great deal of stress and strain and hardly focus on the current job which is the main task right now. In worst cases of survival, they commit crimes once their family are nearly starved. Government of new countries, besides, find it less willing to accept to provide home for immigration families, leading to the latter’s desperate condition. In addition, even though new arrivers may feel psychologically protected by their family members, they face up to threat of losing these people if the later fails to adapt. For instance, because of endeavouring to be accustomed to new climate, their beloved people possibly seriously sick and die of unwanted diseases like infectious epidemics in new regions in case of not being timely immunized and experiencing poor health conditions.
As discussed above, it is irrefutable the tremendous benefits that bringing family together results in. However, its disadvantages outnumbers its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22784810127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81691777705 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59746835443 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.253363951 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185154734917 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524760505831 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648528093806 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127838139067 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086357421715 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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