The diagrams demonstrate the procedures of coffee manufacture in dry method.
Overall, the production of coffee contains two phases. The first phase is preparing the coffee beans manually and the second phase is producing in factory.
The production of coffee beans includes five procedures. The first step is selecting beans by hand. Afterward, the second step is cleaning the beans by sieving it throuth colander. The third and fourth steps are drying the beans under the sun for four weeks. During the period, the beans must be constantly raked and turned. Then comes the fifth step of storing the completely dried beans in silo.
The manufacture of coffee involves seven procedures. The first step is transporting the entirely dried beans to mill. Thereafter, the beans will be hulled, graded and bagged. The bagged coffee beans can be sold directly or sold after roasting and packed in small bags.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... coffee beans includes five procedures. The first step is selecting beans by hand. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, third, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55880439118 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 16.1586073569 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.7692307692 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3846153846 22.9334400587 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07396183573 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346986676827 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388189401887 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633782131018 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270075265721 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.46 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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