TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Nowadays many parents complain that educating children has become increasingly difficult because youngsters tend to spend too much time online. Although some people may disagree with the stance, I completely support it. The reasons on which my stance is based will be discussed in details below.
Firstly, controlling children's usage of the internet is excruciatingly difficult. Today the web has become ubiquitous; a person may get access to it via smartphone, laptop, e-tablet and even e-book. Although some persons claim that usage of the net may be easily controlled via inbuilt means of parental control of Microsoft Windows and iOS, in reality it is an arduous task which requires from parents having some knowledge in the field. In fact, many parents struggle to impose the limitation of children's devices; moreover, often offspring is well-informed and may easily undo parents' actions.
Secondly, the internet and services which are associated with it have become an unavoidable part of everyday life of our children. In fact, they started to use it at yearly age and embrace it completely. Children use Twitter, Facebook for all types of social interactions. If someone really thinks that he may simply forbid the child to use the web, he is badly mistaken because. Today's child does not use the web, he lives in it; thus youngsters sit in the internet during school classes, instead of paying attention to educators’ words they watch photos and type posts; unfortunately, teachers and parents may hardly impact on the situation.
Admittedly, there are some reasons which may allow to someone to state that time spend on the web has a beneficial effect on children's education. Chiefly, the one may aver that children use their time on learning and studying new information, the one even may point out on a vast number of web-sites, You Tube videos which have educational value. In fact, your parents might only dream of such easy access to knowledge. However, I still affirm the idea that under today's conditions education of modern children has become arduous task because although they could spend time on studying, youngsters are prone to devote their time to having fun and playing games.
To wrap up, education of today's children is a very difficult task because offspring spend too much time online and we can hardly control it. Additionally to it, the net has become a part of their social life which cannot be taken away without hurting their interests.
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Essay evaluation report
become arduous task
become an arduous task
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 407 350
No. of Characters: 2020 1500
No. of Different Words: 216 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.492 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.963 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.599 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.611 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.226 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...me online and we can hardly control it. Additionally to it, the net has become a part of the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11793611794 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70852176778 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547911547912 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.670270165 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.722222222 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170820901082 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577540854883 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671118958594 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109728227695 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477919130632 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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