Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Agree to this arrangement.
– Say what time is suitable for you.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
Dear Priya,
Hope this letter finds you well. I have received your letter and glad to know that you are planning to drop your kids at my house over the weekend.
Firstly, my whole family is very excited to have them with us and we are looking forward to spend some good time together. I would make sure that they will have a pleasant and comfortable stay at my house.
Since, you are leaving to Pune on Saturday morning, hence, it would be convenient to leave the children at my house on Friday night post 8PM as I will be back from the office around 7PM.
However, as I am meeting your children after a while, therefore, I have planned few activities for them to fortify my bond with them. On Saturday, I will take them to zoo as it is very famous among children and offering special wildlife program on Saturday morning. On Sunday, my society is organizing fun fare event for children and arranging competition, I feel children would be happy to participate in fun fare event. I hope you would be satisfied with my planning and would not worry too much about children.
I look forward to meeting you all on Friday.
Best regards,
Sonali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to spending'.
Suggestion: to spending
...them with us and we are looking forward to spend some good time together. I would make s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57211538462 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39130865085 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3176473074 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17766671965 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714601485267 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645198641596 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106552514532 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868122987834 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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