some people think that money is one of the essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without money.
what other factors contribute towards happiness.
“Money cannot buy happiness” is a famous saying and there are many supporters and opponents of this viewpoint. However, in my opinion, to some extent money is vital to lead a happy life, but other aspects are also as essential as money.
To begin, the most substantial parameter contributes towards happiness is loving family. Despite of having feeble financial background, many individuals are living happy life due to strong family support. Whereas, it has been observed many times, that wealthy people are more prone to depression in spite of having extravagance livelihood and reason being is broken family which causes isolation. For example, depression is very common among the people of the developed countries compared to the developing nations, because trend of living together in the developing countries give people strength to face hardship and challenges of life.
However, apart from family, there are another factors, which analyze level of happiness. For instance, many people have certain goals in their lives and after achieving those goals they get real feel of happiness such as, scientists spend their entire life in research and after attaining desired result, they sense the real happiness. Furthermore, job satisfaction and successful business another factors in individuals life, which catalyze the happiness. Nonetheless, without money life could become arduous and challenging, hence, money could not be eluded completely if one wants to live a peaceful life.
To conclude, I believe, to a larger extent money decides the direction of the life but with the support of doting family and hard work, true happiness in the world could be achieved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...parameter contributes towards happiness is loving family. Despite of having feeble financ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43346007605 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77822685083 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5254631611 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250982661333 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089433916135 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463890499474 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139874913132 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446028927442 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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